Chelsea's blog
Jun. 12, 2008
Story

Hi I am going to write a story for you to read!!

           

 

          “Ouch!!! Don’t do that, Darren!”  shouted Ellie as she rubbed her eyes trying to make the stinging stop.

 

          Darren replied, “Well, then stop standing so close to me.”

 

          “Okay,” mumbled Ellie.

 

          “Hey, look over there an old tall tree, I think it will be a good

 

climbing tree,” remarked Darren as he moved towards the tree.

 

          “NO WAY, we are going home!” yelled Ellie, as she shook her head

 

in two district movements. Because I am hungry and Mom said to be home

 

by lunch.”

 

          “Fine we will return to camp, eat lunch and come back here.”

         

          Through the forest, they stepped on the fallen pine cones that were

 

scattered over the mossy ground. To Darren and Ellie the trees all looked the

 

same. Fifteen minutes later they turned to each other with confused eyes.

         

“Darren, do you know where we are?” questioned Ellie.

 

          “No, do you?”

 

          “No, hey look over there,” Ellie blurted out while she pointed her finger.

 

          “What?” Darren excitingly asked.

 

          It is the tree that Darren wanted to climb, they both realized as they lowered their heads on their chests.

            Resting her arms on her stomach, Ellie complained,

“Darren I’m hungry, my tummy won’t stop growling.”

 

          “Look it’s a bush full of berries,” Darren pointed out.

 

          Their short legs quickly stepped towards the raspberries.  As they

 

stuffed their faces with the juicy fruit, the red liquid dripped down their

 

chins.  While they were enjoying the yummy snack, twigs and leaves

 

cracked in the distance.  It was like some animal was stalking them. With

 

frightened faces the siblings stared at the trees.  Suddenly something jumped

 

out of the bushes causing them to jerk backwards.  In front of the two lost

 

children was the forest ranger they had met while entering camp with their

 

parents.

 

          The siblings ran to hug ranger Joe as they blurted in relief, “Were so

 

happy to see you.”  Following their leader through the trail, the children

 

were eager to meet their mother and Father.

 

 

 

 

                                                  Composed by,

                                                        Chelsea Mahaffey

Hope you enjoyed that story!!!

 


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Jun. 12, 2008 - Story

Posted by brittany11


Hay!!Chelsea! !
That was a very good story. Bye Brittany


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Jul. 29, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by cairo


Great story!
I think its funny at the begining where Ellie says "Stop it Darren!" and Darren says, " don't stand there then!" Maybe I think Its funny just because I have probably heard them have that conversation before!!
cairo


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