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Dateline: Oct. 23, 2006
Dream

Last night I had the craziest dream.  When I had this dream it was on Sunday night  10/22/06. First of all my brothers are in boy scouts, and they had to go swimming in the public pool.  But they were not aloud to swim for fun unless, they captured this ugly black rat that liked to swim. I  thought he was quite cute of course. I love rats. But really I wanted to be near this guy I liked. His name was Ryan, but he was too old for me he's about 16.  I wanted to go swimming to so I went over to my dad and asked, "May I go swimming with the boys if I promise I won't bother them?" My dad said, "Yes." I knew I really just  wanted to bug Ryan.    When I got there I started to swim, then I saw the cute black rat right by me.  I almost got him but missed, because Ryan jumped in to catch it and he missed  it because of me. I  got in the way of his jump. When that happened one of my brothers Tim, caught the rat in a net he had. Then when Tim cought it, Ryan started yelling at me saying "If it wasn't for you I would have had that rat.  That made me shed a tear, but then I moved on, saying to myself. "Why should I even like Ryan he is still dateing my older sister!" At that moment I gave up likeing Ryan.

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Oct. 23, 2006 - Great writing

Posted by Dutchy

I just wanted to say that I enjoyed your writing. I look forward to reading more of it!

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