Sep. 20, 2007
The story of the girl who never got a horse...
I like making stories like the other blogs I have read other girls doing, so I am going to make a story:

Once upon a time there was a little girl who loved horses. She wanted a horse, but her father wouldn't let her because it was too much money, and her mother wouldn't let her either. There was a hundred bucks saved in a little box in the garage. The girl didn't understand. Maybe, she thought, that they didn't know the money was there. She was trying to figure out in her head why they had to do that and why didn't they understand. She asked another day when she turned nine, on her birthday. She whispered to her mom, I thought you were going to get me a horse. Her mom nodded and she kept talking to the other girls. The girl wondered why, but she thought that they didn't understand like the other part of the story. And, she found a horse out in the woods with her old horse! She needed a younger horse. The poor horse laying in the grass, she wondered what was wrong. She got her staying stick out from the pocket of her old horse, and put it the grass tied to the old horse, so it would stay. She put the little horse inside the pocket. She was big as the whole bag. She figured out the horse was a foal. The foal was a pretty golden color and would soon grow up to be a beautiful stallion. She brought it home and her mom and dad said, you can have her!
The end

Comments
Sep. 24, 2007
hi
Posted by LovetheLord
I love your blog! The story is cool, but things happen fast. Try extending the stories to weeks. I wrote a story called Challenger 2050. It's cool.
Natalia
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