Chapter #2
At the end of school, Thorn walked over to her locker. When she opened it she found a little whirl pool. After a minute of thinking, she decided to jump into it. For about 10 seconds she saw all sorts of colors. Then finally, she found herself in a beatiful piece of land. Then she just hapened to see a boy about her age. Then she decied to walk over to him. "Aho!" said the boy. "Pardin?" "Sorry about that. I meant to say Hi. And not to be rude but, who are you?" "It's ok. My name's Thorn." "Hi Thorn!!!!"
This one was kind of short, but I don't have enough time to write it.
BYE!!!!!!
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May. 24, 2006 - Untitled Comment
May. 26, 2006 - I really like your story!
 Posted by willow
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Hey Rachel! I wonder why you aren't getting my emails! I am getting your emails that you sned me. Could you please send me your email address again just to make sure I have it right? Thank you!
I really like your story. I can't wait to hear what happens next. You can write good stories.
---Willow---
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May. 26, 2006 - I really like your story!
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Hey Rachel! I wonder why you aren't getting my emails! I am getting your emails that you sned me. Could you please send me your email address again just to make sure I have it right? Thank you!
I really like your story. I can't wait to hear what happens next. You can write good stories.
---Willow---
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May. 27, 2006 - Untitled Comment
 Posted by Larry
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I like your story. My name is "Larry" and I am nine years old. I have a german shepherd/Lab dog named Ginny. My favorite color is purple. Hope your having a good day.
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May. 27, 2006 - Great Story...
May. 29, 2006 - Untitled Comment
 Posted by doglvr
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tagged!
what is your favorite..
food
color
tv show
cd
actor
actrsse
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