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Oct. 12, 2008

Chapter One [of my book!]

And There Were Three

by Chliara Maire [a.k.a. EowynDernhelm]

 

Chapter One

 

The baying of hounds shook the cold silence of a dark, grim forest as a young woman, barely more than a girl, ran with panting mouth and a baby upon her heaving back; she was running as fast as she was able among the tall trees, stumbling as she tripped over roots and vines. The beams of the night’s crescent moon slipped through small openings in the towering branches of the forest, throwing patches of silver-blue on the fallen leaves. As the girl sped through these soft rays, they cast glances upon her ragged clothes which were stained, not with dirt or filth, but with blood.

 

The hounds howled again; they were closer. The girl gasped for breath, and suddenly her legs crumbled under her. She fell, and the baby tumbled off her, crying piteously. The girl groaned and tried to move her legs, but one of her ankles was twisted. It was now her turn to weep, and with the tears streaming down her face, she kissed the infant’s plump cheek and set him in a rotted log. She gave him something from a bottle, and his tears stopped. She set down a small gold box with intricate and queer designs beside the baby, and quickly scooped up leaves with which she covered him. The nearing barks of the dogs ringing in her ears, she proceeded to drag herself away from the log. She crawled upon the leaves, to get as far away from the baby as possible, and the hounds were so close she could hear the pattering of their feet upon the ground, and also the shouts of their masters. She found herself too weak to move anymore, and sank onto the leaves. She waited, waited for what?…for death.

 

The dogs burst out of a thicket, sniffing the ground. Close behind them were men on horses, holding flaming torches. The cruel eyes of the bloodhounds reflected the light, glittering with malice and the delight of the hunt. Their cries told the men that the hunted was found, and the riders urged their horses on. Only voices were heard, and then four of the five men rode away, taking the torches with them, and as they rode they threw the dogs some meat, a reward for hunting down the girl. One man remained, hovering over her limp form. In the cold moonlight the naked blade of a shimmering axe rose, and fell with a sickeningly soft thud. A quiet but sharp gasp came from the girl, then nothing more.

 

The man mounted his horse and rode away, without even a backward glance. By great luck (or perhaps help from a more powerful source), the baby remained unobserved by both the men and their dogs. The child knew naught of what horror had just occurred in the shadows of the forest, for he was fast asleep. Some hours later, near dawn, he awoke confused, for he could hardly breathe and something was tickling his face. He squirmed, trying to get the leaves off his face, but only a few fell. He started whimpering, frustrated. Suddenly the babe heard footsteps rustling in the leaves, accompanied by soft voices. His whimpers became bawls, and swiftly attracted the attention of the strangers. The leaves were brushed from the baby’s face, and he looked up into a pair of lovely sky-blue eyes gracefully positioned in a small, pretty face with a pointed chin. The baby could not know, but this was the fairy Anomien, the Water Fairy, and also the younger sister of the Fairy Queen. She was clad in a silver dress with a girdle that matched her eyes. Finely shaped ears that formed into a point on their tip peeked out of her glossy tresses which were the color of the sun; these shiny locks framed her face and tumbled down her shoulders like a waterfall. If one were to look closely at these yellow strands, one would see small blue droplets of water nestling among the gold. Her marble hands were small, as was the rest of her body, and her finely shaped feet were bare. This picture of mystical beauty gazed at the baby and exclaimed,

“Why, Syla, ‘tis but a child, a human child, and a pretty one at that. Look at his dark brown hair, and his rosy cheeks, and blue eyes! Is he not a sweet thing?”

Her companion peered searchingly at the boy. She was as dark as Anomien was fair, with wavy auburn hair, eyes as black as the deepest abyss, and a reddish complexion. She was slightly larger in frame than the Water Fairy, and with a more earth-like glance. Her silky garment was the same color as the majestic fir trees which surrounded them, with a gold sash wrapped around her shoulder, across her breast and tied at the waist. Her wings were also green, but a shade darker than Anomien’s, and not as sparkly. She was barefoot as well, and her feet were rather dirty from working in her garden. She was the Earth Fairy, and she looked it. She replied to her companion’s question,

“Oh, he might be sweet, but not to my liking. Babies are loud wee things, and I have no use for them. You can keep him if you like; you will have no argument from me.”

“Syla, how can you say so? It is true they might be a bit troublesome, but they are darlings, and so innocent….I shall ask my lady” (the Fairy Queen) “if I can keep him, and raise him on the river. I wonder where he came from.” She picked up the boy, and rocked him gently in her arms. “Good babe,” she crooned as she saw him close his eyes. Syla watched her, shaking her head.

“He’ll turn out to be trouble, mark my words,” proclaimed the Earth Fairy. “Humans are rather stupid creatures with usually no sense of right or wrong.” Anomien merely shrugged her shoulders. Syla continued to speak, running her hands over the leaves which had previously been the baby’s bed. “He’ll be playing tricks on the other fairies, running away and…Anomien! Look at this!” Syla held in her hand the gold box with the strange designs. Anomien moved close to get a better look at it.

“How queer, and beautiful,” she said wonderingly. “It looks like there are letters on it, but written in some language I cannot read. Can you make anything out?”

“No, I can’t,” replied Syla. “Perhaps the Queen will know something about it. She is very wise and book-learned. Why don’t we take it to her?”

“Certainly. We have to get back anyway, and this fellow probably needs some nourishment. Let’s get out of this forest so we can fly,” for the overhead branches were so thick the fairies could not fly through them.

The companions started walking, gliding really, in their fairy way, through the wood, Anomien leading, Syla following, when suddenly the latter stopped and said in a low voice,

“Anomien.” The Water Fairy ceased walking.

“What is it?” she answered, almost impatiently. She was absorbed in the baby at the moment, and was in a hurry to get him something to eat. “What’s the matter?”

“Anomien, I think I found the baby’s mother.”

 

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Okay, okay, I know it was short; but most of the chapters are, unfortunately.  What do you think?

 

Love,

Eówyn

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Comments

Oct. 12, 2008 - your story

Posted by Jody
wow is what i say! your story is getting off to a great start! i love fantasy and stuff like that! you wanna be friends? i would love to!

Sunshine!
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Oct. 12, 2008 - Awsome Eowyn!

Posted by nachoaveragegirl
I love the how the story is going so far! I would be posting my story soon, by "Mr Nobody" deleted all my stuff that I had written for the story! Grrrr....

In Christ alone,
Hannah Grace.
Psalm 150:6

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Oct. 13, 2008 - Wow!

Posted by horsewings
Oh, wow! It grabs you from the beggining and leaves you on a cliff hanger. I love it and can't wait for the next chapter. My story looks juvinile next to yours.
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Oct. 14, 2008 - that was awesome!!!1

Posted by cinderellagirl14
That was one of the best things I have ever read!! I loved all the detail! It seemed so real; I could actually see it!
Can't wait to see more! (if I'm allowed) Want to be friends?
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Oct. 14, 2008 - Another question

Posted by cinderellagirl14
Where did you find that pic of the girl from LOTR? And how did you get music? I'm new at all this, and would really appreciate some help!
Thanks!
Caio! (italian for goodbye)
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Oct. 14, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by OutlawedPrincess
*Gasps in awe* Oh, Chliara that was beautiful!!!!!!! Post more!!!!!!!!!
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Oct. 14, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by 1AspiringLilly
Great story! Can't wait to read more!

~Lilly~
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Oct. 15, 2008 - Good Story!

Posted by Halfling
That was great! I want to know the rest! I love your writing style. It was truly enchanting. You did a beautiful job. So are you done with the book or are you writing it as you go along? Do you have the entire plot decided?

~The Halfling
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Oct. 15, 2008 - RYC:

Posted by Halfling
Well, I guess if you know how you're going to end it, you'll be okay. I've never tried writing a book, but I think I would feel like I was on an adventure if I was just writing it as I went along. I'm not that creative though.

I still can't get over that chapter. I can't wait for Chapter 2!! Is "And There Were Three" the chapter title or the book title?

~The Halfling
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Oct. 15, 2008 - OOH!!!

Posted by Anonymous
Ooh! I really like it! You did good with your describing and conversation.....I'm not good at conversation! :) lol! I can't wait for more! Keep it up!
Anna
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Oct. 15, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Ness
Wow it was great!
Do you have it all written or are you posting it as you go along?
It was really good! I like your writing style, Can't wait for more!
~Ness
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Oct. 15, 2008 - *speechless*

Posted by Avii
OMG, I cannot belive it!!! You told me it was good.....BUT NOT THIS GOOD!!!

The beginning, with the murder and the running, was my favourite part. LOVED IT!!! Of course, I love dark stuff, so its only natural that THAT is the part I would love this most. :D Oh well, stunning! Flawless! EPIC

~Avii
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Oct. 18, 2008 - another question

Posted by cinderellagirl14
hey Eowyn,
I'm really confused wiht the whole pic thing. i tried to change the top pic but it won't do anything. I found the perfect pic of Susan Pevensie from narnia! um, would you know how to get side pics?
thanks!
your friend,
cinderellagirl14
(by the way, check out my blog. I put the first chapter of my new story on!)
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Oct. 18, 2008 - Hey

Posted by caitlyn98
Thought I would come and leave a comment and say Hi!! Thanks for all the comments you have left me!
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Oct. 20, 2008 - Thanks!!!

Posted by cinderellagirl14
Thank you sooo much!!!! so far you are the first person to comment on my story! (the other one was me!) I will most likely be putting chapter two on today, and i'm already working on three!
I think it would be best to explain it. I have soo many pics to uplaod, and I laready have them, its just getting it on there!
Thanks!
caio,
cinderellagirl14
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Dec. 4, 2008 - hey!

Posted by Grady24
Hey Clare!
I FINALLY was able to read your story! I love it!! I can't wait to read the rest of it!
~ Amanda
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Jan. 10, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Arwen95
This chapter was awesome. Don't worry some of the chapters in book are real short too! I can't wait to keep reading!

Arwen
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Feb. 26, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by 1DRAJENGIRL
Wow, what a cool story!! I couldn't take my eyes off it!! Have you thought of publishing this? I would get it in a heartbeat!!
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Mar. 8, 2009 - !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by JBFan1199
I love it I'm a writer too, and I love it so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jun. 16, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by ArcherforGod
I absolutely love stories about fairies! I really like how you described what they look like. I loved it!
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