The Gatekeeper's Pen
Dec. 17, 2008
Some Thoughts on Fantasy, Part 3

Today I'm going to conclude the series on fantasy by giving a few suggestions on how to write it. Once again, I'm no expert, but I do have a lot of experience reading fantasy, and a little experience writing it. These are just my suggestions based on that experience, and please feel free to add or subtract from them as much as you need to.

The most important thing to remember as you write fantasy, just as with every kind of writing, is that you're doing it for God. No matter how good your story is, no matter whether you get it published or not, no matter how many people like it, it means nothing if it does not glorify God and bless His people in some way. As I said in the last post, fantasy has a unique potential for communicating the gospel without being preachy, and we should take advantage of that.

On a more practical note, here are a few suggestions that may help you improve the quality of your fantasy stories and avoid making some of the mistakes that most fantasy authors make.

1. Be creative. Remember, the possibilities for fantasy are endless! It doesn't matter how crazy your ideas are; if you write convincingly enough, they can still make a great story. Don't be afraid to think outside the box. Elves and dragons are cool, but they don't need to be in every fantasy story.

2. Be original. Don't try to write like your favorite fantasy authors, whoever they may be. Every writer has a different style, and yours will sound much better if you're not trying to imitate someone else's. Just be yourself. I suggest trying not to read, watch, or even think about The Lord of the Rings, The Chronicles of Narnia, or any other fantasy book you like while you're making up a story. Also remember to check your work often to make sure your dialogue and plotlines don't sound too familiar. I am often surprised at how easy it is, when you're as steeped in the worlds of Narnia and Middle Earth as I am, to mimic them without noticing it.

3. Be descriptive. I know that a lot of people get bored with J.R.R. Tolkien's long descriptions of places in Middle Earth, but would his world seem half as real and vivid if he had left them out? Remember, your readers have never seen your imaginary worlds, creatures, or characters before. Describe them in a way that makes your readers see them as wonderful, terrible, or beautiful as you imagine them. Make them come to life. I realize that this is difficult, and I still need to work on it myself, but it I can guarantee it will be worth it.

4. Be consistent. Even though there are no set rules for fantasy stories, you still have to follow the ones you make up. Fantasy can't be realistic in the sense that everything in it could really happen, but it should be realistic in whatever context you've created. For example, if your fantasy world is medieval (people fight with swords, live in castles, etc.), don't put 21st-century expressions in the dialogue. (I know that seems obvious, but I have read fantasy books that make this mistake, and it sounds very silly.) If you've made it clear that dragons can't go near water, don't have a dragon attack a ship. It's easier to make mistakes like this than you might think. Always be on the lookout for inconsistencies in your writing.

5. Have fun! Writing fantasy, like all writing, is hard, but it can also be a blast. Don't worry too much about how good your stories are at first. Just focus on being creative and having fun. Editing can come later.

Well, I hope that was somewhat helpful, at least. Thanks for reading!


Comments

Dec. 20, 2008 - Thanks

Posted by horsewings

Wow! I loved your fantasy series! It was really good and insightful! I am in the middle of writing two fantasy stories right now, and those tips on writing will help me a lot! It's so hard to not copy Tolkien or Lewis, but your idea about not thinking about, reading, or seeing the books/movies is a good idea! Thanks!

Horsewings

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Jul. 2, 2009 - Thanks!

Posted by LadyMaie

I agree with you almost completely, but I'd like to mention that first of all, while it IS your book, and you have the creative license to make it how you want it, you still have to follow God's rules. I know a lot of people who say things like, "I don't agree with the good wizards in Harry Potter, because they are put in our world, where God says wizards are bad. In Lord of the Rings, it's a different world, so good wizards are fine."
(That's just an example of the logic I hear--it isn't meant to try and show my opinion on anything.)
I disagree with that logic. God's commandments are still commandments even when you're writing about another world. Just something to keep in mind.
Also, about modern language in Medieval fantasy. I don't like it when I read a book in this genre and highly modern words pop up, like, "okay," and, "hi." But I do think that if you're writing about your world, you don't need to make it archaic. In the novel I am writing right now, I try and keep it very neutral--no ultra-modern words, and no ultra-archaic words either. Like in LOTR.

God bless!
~Hannah

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Jul. 2, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by thegatekeeper

You're right, Lady Maie. There is ONE law you have to follow in writing fantasy, and that is God's Word. Thanks for pointing that out. However, I think it's possible for God's laws to look a little different in a different setting. For example, the wizards in LOTR are different from real wizards in that their power doesn't come from demonic forces, or even from themselves. If you read the appendices and the Silmarillion, you will learn that they are actually Maia who were given their power by Iluvatar (the God of Middle Earth). That's why I don't immediately throw out a fantasy book just because it contains "magic" and so forth. Sometimes fantasy authors can use things that might be bad in our world to illustrate truth. I haven't read the Harry Potter books, but from what I hear, their wizards are more like the real thing. That's the difference between Harry Potter and LOTR. Does that make sense? Oh, and I totally agree about the language thing. No need to use "thee" and "thou". :)

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Jul. 3, 2009 - Absolutely...

Posted by LadyMaie

Oh, yes--I don't have a problem with the LOTR wizards. I did know that. I was just using that as an example. I do wish Tolkien had made up his own name for them, though. I mean, it isn't like he didn't have the creativity. *Grin*
Well, I read the HP books, and I think that they are more that way. But even so, I have had convincing arguments placed before me in the line of, "In HP, the, "good," magic is just another law of physics--it doesn't have to do with demons or spirits." Again, if that is so, I think JK shouldn't have made it look so much like true magic. (And I have other problems with HP.)
Anyways. *Smile*

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