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faster blaster
Jan. 14, 2008
a story that I wrote!!!!!!!!!!!
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TOUCHED BY AN ANGEL
by jean jacket
Once there was a pretty little girl named aly. The only thing wrong in her life was that she was
lame, but aly didn't ever complain really. She had two older brothers(victor and michael) and
one younger sister(alicia). Aly's father had died in a bad car crash two years earlier. Without
him the family barely got by. The children's mother sewed and did laundery for neighbors,
while michael and victor skipped school an worked at a dinner. With their little bit of money the family bought a small apartment on the third floor of a run down building. Aly rarely went outside because of all the stairs and because the elevator was broken.
One day Alicia and her mother went to the store leaving Aly to watch the never ending rush of cars below on the street. "don't worry dear I will be back in about a hour, nothing will happen to you"said her mother. she was greatly mistaken. After they left Aly, tired of watching the carsfell asleep in her favorite chair.
On the 5th floor the danger that Aly's mother said wouldn't happen did happen. A mrs.
Skew( who was a widow) had gone to work and left two things out that didn't seem safe
to leave alone. She left her big black cat roger out and her oil lamp lit(she didn't like
electricity). Roger was a curious and naughty cat. After Mrs. Skew left roger jumped on
the kitchen table sniffing as he walked around. As he sideled passed the lamp he pushed it off.
Meowing loudly he jumped off the table and out the open window. In minutes Mrs. Skew's
apartment was ablaze. In no time at all the 5th floor was on fire. Luckily no one but Mrs. Skew
lived on level 5 and everyone else(except aly) were out. Aly slept on as the dangerous fire
started burning the 4th floor.
"ding ding ding apartment on fire, east 5th street" the buzzer called out in the fire station. Jumping
into their coats the firefighters jumped into their big red life savers and drove out the big double doors.
The fire chief speed ahead and arrived at the scene first. Close following came the four big red trucks
with their sirens blaring and their lights flashing. Aly slept on.
She finally woke up when her smoke alarm went off. She smelled smoke and peering out the window saw
the flames. Screaming for help she frantically tried to get out of her chair. She fell stomach first twisting her
left leg in the process. pain shot through her leg as she lay screaming, praying and crying at the
same time. Her pleas were heard by god and one brave fireman. Jack ran to the fire truck and got
his mask and oxygen tank on. The rest of his outfit followed quickly. "jack what are you doing,"
mary said, Mary was the fire chief and Jack's girlfriend, " you can't go in their it's too dangerous."
"I have to mary, someone's in there, I heard a scream,"he said through his mask. "It was only the
wind, don't be so silly jack," mary started to say, but jack was already gone.
Aly didn't know how long she lay there crying. Many times she would call for her dad,"daddy please save
me." Crawling across the bedroom floor despite the pain she made it to the living room. Flames could be seen
from underneath the kitchen door. She struggled to the hallway by the front door, and that was were joe found
her. "daddy I knew you would com for me" aly whispered as jack picked her up, for he had seen how her legs
lay limp and useless. In that moment jack's heart went out to that poor little girl as she wrapped her arms around
his neck. He hunched through the door and hurried downstairs. The 2nd floor was still very dangerous he found
out when a burning beam fell close by his arm just grazing Aly's stocking feet. Once jack looked down at Aly's
face and he saw her pale lips moving in prayer. Now jack wasn't a man of prayer, but in that split second he
realized that with gods help he and this little girl would get out safely. So despite hi not praying for a long time
jack joined Aly in her prayer to their heavenly father.
Meanwhile mary was outside sweating because of he heat and because of her anxiety. Now just like jack she wasn't
very christian like. When she went to church(which was practicly never) she would sit in the back and look at photos
on her iphone, but without realizing it she knelt down in front of the fire and asked gor to bring jack back out of
that burning building safely.
During this whole time you are probably wondering were Aly's mother is. Well after the shopping trip they stopped
at the library really quickly(not really, the were there for TWO HOURS). Little did Aly's mother know, but right as
she an alicia stepped out of the library jack carrie Aly out of the burning apartment building.
"oh jack I knew you could do it,"said mary as the exhausted hero walked towards her. " I didn't do it by myself,
I had a handsome young man helping me to dodge the falling beams." aly still clinging to jack said"he was an angel,
right daddy?" Mary looked at jack puzzled, but jack only shrugged not knowing himself. Right at that moment Aly's
mother arrive franticly looking for her daughter. In a few minutes everything about Aly's dad and about the rescue
were known. Jack sank onto the curb with Aly still holding tightly to him just as the ambulance arrived. The Parame
-dics gently lifted her onto the cot and into the back of the van.
The fire engines left taking mary and jack while the rest of Aly's family spent the night the mission. The whole
story was in the newspaper the next day. Jack was an overnight hero and everyone who read the newspaper
took pity on aly and in a month she had two surgeries on her legs and in a couple of months she was able to
walk like everyone else.
Mary was quite happy with all the fame Jack was getting and she and Jack became true christians. Two years after
the fire mary and Jack were married. Aly of course was part of it.
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Jan. 14, 2008
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TOUCHED BY AN ANGEL
by jean jacket
Once there was a pretty little girl named aly. The only thing wrong in her life was that she was
lame, but aly didn't ever complain really. She had two older brothers(victor and michael) and
one younger sister(alicia). Aly's father had died in a bad car crash two years earlier. Without
him the family barely got by. The children's mother sewed and did laundery for neighbors,
while michael and victor skipped school an worked at a dinner. With their little bit of money the family bought a small apartment on the third floor of a run down building. Aly rarely went outside because of all the stairs and because the elevator was broken.
One day Alicia and her mother went to the store leaving Aly to watch the never ending rush of cars below on the street. "don't worry dear I will be back in about a hour, nothing will happen to you"said her mother. she was greatly mistaken. After they left Aly, tired of watching the carsfell asleep in her favorite chair.
On the 5th floor the danger that Aly's mother said wouldn't happen did happen. A mrs.
Skew( who was a widow) had gone to work and left two things out that didn't seem safe
to leave alone. She left her big black cat roger out and her oil lamp lit(she didn't like
electricity). Roger was a curious and naughty cat. After Mrs. Skew left roger jumped on
the kitchen table sniffing as he walked around. As he sideled passed the lamp he pushed it off.
Meowing loudly he jumped off the table and out the open window. In minutes Mrs. Skew's
apartment was ablaze. In no time at all the 5th floor was on fire. Luckily no one but Mrs. Skew
lived on level 5 and everyone else(except aly) were out. Aly slept on as the dangerous fire
started burning the 4th floor.
"ding ding ding apartment on fire, east 5th street" the buzzer called out in the fire station. Jumping
into their coats the firefighters jumped into their big red life savers and drove out the big double doors.
The fire chief speed ahead and arrived at the scene first. Close following came the four big red trucks
with their sirens blaring and their lights flashing. Aly slept on.
She finally woke up when her smoke alarm went off. She smelled smoke and peering out the window saw
the flames. Screaming for help she frantically tried to get out of her chair. She fell stomach first twisting her
left leg in the process. pain shot through her leg as she lay screaming, praying and crying at the
same time. Her pleas were heard by god and one brave fireman. Jack ran to the fire truck and got
his mask and oxygen tank on. The rest of his outfit followed quickly. "jack what are you doing,"
mary said, Mary was the fire chief and Jack's girlfriend, " you can't go in their it's too dangerous."
"I have to mary, someone's in there, I heard a scream,"he said through his mask. "It was only the
wind, don't be so silly jack," mary started to say, but jack was already gone.
Aly didn't know how long she lay there crying. Many times she would call for her dad,"daddy please save
me." Crawling across the bedroom floor despite the pain she made it to the living room. Flames could be seen
from underneath the kitchen door. She struggled to the hallway by the front door, and that was were joe found
her. "daddy I knew you would com for me" aly whispered as jack picked her up, for he had seen how her legs
lay limp and useless. In that moment jack's heart went out to that poor little girl as she wrapped her arms around
his neck. He hunched through the door and hurried downstairs. The 2nd floor was still very dangerous he found
out when a burning beam fell close by his arm just grazing Aly's stocking feet. Once jack looked down at Aly's
face and he saw her pale lips moving in prayer. Now jack wasn't a man of prayer, but in that split second he
realized that with gods help he and this little girl would get out safely. So despite hi not praying for a long time
jack joined Aly in her prayer to their heavenly father.
Meanwhile mary was outside sweating because of he heat and because of her anxiety. Now just like jack she wasn't
very christian like. When she went to church(which was practicly never) she would sit in the back and look at photos
on her iphone, but without realizing it she knelt down in front of the fire and asked gor to bring jack back out of
that burning building safely.
During this whole time you are probably wondering were Aly's mother is. Well after the shopping trip they stopped
at the library really quickly(not really, the were there for TWO HOURS). Little did Aly's mother know, but right as
she an alicia stepped out of the library jack carrie Aly out of the burning apartment building.
"oh jack I knew you could do it,"said mary as the exhausted hero walked towards her. " I didn't do it by myself,
I had a handsome young man helping me to dodge the falling beams." aly still clinging to jack said"he was an angel,
right daddy?" Mary looked at jack puzzled, but jack only shrugged not knowing himself. Right at that moment Aly's
mother arrive franticly looking for her daughter. In a few minutes everything about Aly's dad and about the rescue
were known. Jack sank onto the curb with Aly still holding tightly to him just as the ambulance arrived. The Parame
-dics gently lifted her onto the cot and into the back of the van.
The fire engines left taking mary and jack while the rest of Aly's family spent the night the mission. The whole
story was in the newspaper the next day. Jack was an overnight hero and everyone who read the newspaper
took pity on aly and in a month she had two surgeries on her legs and in a couple of months she was able to
walk like everyone else.
Mary was quite happy with all the fame Jack was getting and she and Jack became true christians. Two years after
the fire mary and Jack were married. Aly of course was part of it.
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Mar. 2, 2008 - SOO sweet