Here's a story I'm in the process of writing.
Jessica
A Journey of a Lifetime
Chapter 1 The Voyage
“Oh Mum, I do wish we didn’t have to leave England.” sighed twenty-year-old Jan Applebee as she stared out at the sea, “The war wasn’t so bad where we lived.”
“Come away from the balcony, Dear, and please stop acting like the world is coming to an end.” commanded Jan’s mother.
“The world is coming to and end.” Jan muttered under her breath.
“I am going to ignore that remark.” Mum said with a slight laugh. “Well dearie, you can keep your chin up with this news. I found out that there are many eligible young men on this ship.
Jan stared at her mother in shock, but her mother shrugged it off.
“Well, it never hurts to try.” Mum answered, “Now come along to dinner.” With that she turned and went down to the banqueting hall.
Jan turned to follow. Under her breath, she muttered,” I wish Pa was not in the war. He would let me choose my own husband.”
As she turned to enter the banqueting hall, she bumped into a young man around her age.
“Oh, I’m so sorry, Mrs.…”
“Jan...Jan Applebee… and its miss, not Mrs. And you are..?”
“Jeff…Jeff Daley.”
“Well Mr. Daley it is a pleasure to meet you.” Jan said.
“The same to you Miss Applebee.” Jeff replied.
“Well, my mother is waiting dinner on me so I must go now,” Jan said, with a slight tone of disappointment. She suddenly started to shiver and realized show cold it was. She remembered how cold it got at a night out at sea.
She immediately said,” Goodnight, sir,” and hurried indoors.
“Goodnight, miss.” Jeff replied.
Chapter 2 Hurricane!
Days turned into weeks as the ship slowly made its way across the Atlantic Ocean. Jan began longing to put her feet on dry land again. Her mother, though, was enjoying the voyage immensely. She began to call on each man, one by one, and one by one Jan refused them.
Weeks later, Jan turned to her mother and said, “I have seen forty young men. All of which I have refused. Please don’t send me any more. They are all so dull and fat. I want to choose my own husband.”
“You need to trust me that I only have your best interest in mind,” her mother replied.
Suddenly, the ship gave an awful jerk. It was so sudden that Jan and her mother were both knocked off their feet.
“What was that?” Jan shouted to her mother.
“I don’t…, Mum started to reply when Jan interrupted.
“Listen”
What they heard was the shouting of sailors as they hurriedly tied things down.
“Did you hear what one of the sailors said?” Jan asked her mother, “He said ‘hurricane’! There must be a hurricane coming upon us!”
If you can think of anything I can change to make it better, PM me.
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