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• April 1, 2008 - Reach for the Stars 1

I am starting a new creative writing workshop that looks very cool!  If you want to learn more about it go here

Lesson number 1:  chose a story I have read and figure out the 5 elements for the story.  I picked Boxcar Children by Gertrude Chandler Warner.

Character:  Henry, Jessie, Violet, and Benny
Setting: bakery, woods, streets, a boxcar, and grandpa's house

Problem: 4 children are on their own

Plot: built a dam, collected and cooked all their own food, saved a dog, Henry got a job working at a man's house, made a refrigerator out of rocks, water and cold air

Solution: They found their grandpa and he took care of them


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• April 1, 2008 - Lesson 1

Posted by skmarlow
Welcome, Kayla! Nice to include you in the line up of writing stars! If you "friend" me you will be able to find the site faster and I will friend you, too, and you will be on the List. :-)

I see you have no trouble figuring out how to do the Mr. Linky and leave me a comment so I can find your lesson to give feedback on.

Nice job on your first lesson. You certainly found the 5 elements without any trouble at all. I like how you gave more than one event for your Plot element. I LOVED the Boxcar Children book when I was a kid, although I never could keep interested in the sequels.

I think you will have fun with these lessons and learn some things will help you with your own writing!

See you next time....

-mrs. m-
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