• April 3, 2008 - Reach for the Star 4

Hey everyone! i've done lesson 4. well here is what I have written so far: Antonio- or Blobby-man... has violet skin, and no one knows why.His eyes are big friendly and they are kelly green.He has no arms or legs, and.. he is about 4 feet tall. and well let's face it, his hair is crazy and it's short and brown, and some time gets in the way. He is a really good inventor,he has a problem with his throut, so he only uses body languge. and.. he fights crime with his best friend, Cristofer, who is a super hero! well that's all for now! Bye! Kayla

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• June 4, 2008 - Lesson 4

Posted by skmarlow

YIkes! I don't know what happened, but I never got your comment so I haven't looked at this lesson. Two whole months have gone by and I'm very, very sorry. I usually don't check the Mr. Linky's on the writing blog unless I get a comment. But I saw that you commented and somehow it slipped by me. I hope you are not discouraged. These things happen somehow. If I don't come over to check you lesson within one week, leave me ANOTHER COMMENT and say so. Say, "Mrs. Marlow! I finished my lesson and you haven't checked it yet. Hurry over." LOl Anyway, you have created a most unusual character, and I smiled when I read about all of his physical and personality traits. Have you started a story with him yet? You are the first student to create a character that isn't a person. Very creative. Nicely done.

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