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Oct. 22, 2007
Dough in the Oven

This story was written a while ago, but it was this year, I entered it into a contest, and it was supposed to be on the topic of something coming up. Enjoy!

 

Dough in the Oven

One spring day, my mother was making bread. Soon she had the dough made and put it in the oven to rise. I decided too watch the bread rise, and see if the rising was visible. Soon I decided it was taking too long so I got a book and came back. Every once in a while I looked at the dough until finally, I saw that it was three inches above the pan!
“Mom!” I yelled. “Come look at the dough.” My mom came and looked into the oven through the window in the door.
“It’s almost done,” she said. Soon the timer went off, and we took it out of the oven, and turned the oven on too preheat. In s few minutes, the oven went beep beep which meant that the oven was preheated. My mom put the bread in the oven and set the timer. When the bread was done, I could now wait for supper to come when we could eat it.

 

Amy

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Oct. 22, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by CarrotLover
Hi!
I like your story. this is the first time I posted the first coment on somsones blog. hom many do you have?
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Oct. 23, 2007 - NIce little essay

Posted by SuzyScribbles
Nice little essay, Amy. OK. Now....for fun, you could turn this story into a "What if?" kind of story. "What if?" the dough didn't rise? "What if?" it rose and spilled over the top and down into the racks (like mine has done before). "What if?" it raised perfectly and then it fell when it was cooking! Practice doing your character feelings. How would your mom's face look? What would she say? How would she show her feelings? SHOW me! And...what would happen next? And are there any lessons you could learn? You don't have to learn a lesson with stories, but sometimes it's a nice ending and you may be able to get it published in a church newsletter or something. So put on your thinking cap and see what you can come up with!
There you go! Here is an opportunity to turn a nice little essay into a humorous (or not so humorous) story!
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Oct. 23, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Katherineleigh
Hi!Amy!
Love you,
Kate
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Oct. 23, 2007 - Watching the bread dough rise

Posted by Grampy
Amy, that is a great story! Also, thanks for e-mailing the one about the beautiful button. What fun to read these.

Thanks and keep up the wonderful work.

Grampy
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