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Dec. 18, 2007

I love Winter--My Poem

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I wrote this poem a little over a month ago. I think it is the first poem that I have ever wrote seriously

I Love Winter

I love winter
The snow swirls and whirls around the yard
The ground is as white as sheep's wool
I love winter

I love winter
The ground is as white as sheep's wool
The snowflakes are as crystal
I love winter

I love winter
The snowflakes are as crystal
It's the perfect time to drink hot cocoa
I love winter

I love winter
It's the perfect time to drink hot cocoa
It's time to snuggle up under a blanket and read my favorite book
I love winter

What did you think?

Amy

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Dec. 21, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by ALadybug

Great poem! I like it!
We have an American English dictonary the exact same!!

Anna

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Dec. 22, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by bookworm12

I think it's really good Amy :) it shows how it feels and what it looks like good work on it. Man you could be a Writer when you grow up
Sarah

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Dec. 27, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Abbypie3000

I like that.....Make some more!

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Jan. 11, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by sunflower8

That was great! Write more!!
Bethany :O)

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Sep. 5, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by YoungWriters4Jesus

Hi there!

Your poem was superb! It was enjoyable to read, and it portrayed the season perfectly. The repetition was really cool to see; and you encompassed many of the best things about winter.

Thanks for participating, and don't forget to check back on Sunday for our next assignment.

Kylie & Ashley

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