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Oct. 17, 2007
Writing Workshop Lesson 4

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Lesson 4:

 

Madeline Brown is a ten-year-old girl who lives in the Montana country side. With her long dark brown hair, and bright blue eyes, when sitting on her horse Firedance, she makes a beautiful picture. Maddie loves to ride Firedance around the ranch, and sometimes she even rides to the lake that borders their property, and paints pictures of Firedance.
Since Maddie has chores to do around the farm, she often braids her hair down her back, and then she is free to go.
She loves to cook, and so she often helps the maid Joy in the kitchen.
When sent off to school she gets to ride Firedance. In school, she doesn’t do her best in anything except math. In science, Maddie can hardly keep her mind on the lesson. She claims that science bores her to death.
When she grows up, Maddie wants to be a chef, an author, and a horse breeder.
The only sibling that Maddie has is a five-year-old girl named Sofia. Sofia likes to tag along with Maddie everywhere! Sometimes it annoys Maddie, and she loses her temper but she tries hard to spend a lot of time with her sister and set a good example.

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Dec. 28, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by SuzyScribbles
Your character sketch on Maddie is fantastic (perhaps you should change the word "country" to "state" since Montana is a state). I can really see her, and I look forward to reading a story about Maddie, Firedance, and Sofia.
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Jan. 22, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Bookwriter
I have JUST finished lesson 4!
See ya later!
Bethany
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