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Oct. 17, 2007
Writing Workshop Lesson 8
Character: Nicole Peterson
Setting: Lying on a sandy beach
The sound of the waves was beautiful to listen too! Nicole shut her eyes and wished she could go to sleep. Suddenly, she felt a horrid pain in her big toe! Nicole jumped up and to her horror, she saw a crab as big as a pie pan pinching her toe! Without thinking that the crab might get her again, she reached down and tried to get her toe free but instead, the crab pinched her fingers too!
“Help me!” she cried. Just then a teenager came by and saw Nicole’s trouble!
“You need help? I’ll help you,” he said. The boy pulled something out of his pocket and sprinkled it all over her stomach. The crab came and crawled after it! It was crab food!
“You go away!!! Help!!!!” screamed Nicole.
“Wake up Nicole. Wake up,” said Jane, Nicole’s older sister.
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