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Jan. 30, 2008
Sticky Stew--A Poem By Me

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Here is a poem I wrote. Its not very good since I wrote it while I was bored...

Did you like it??? If so let me know, and if you have any suggestions on how I could change something, I'm willing to listen!
Amy
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Jan. 30, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by bookworm12
I think it's great, um don't mean to be rude or if you don't know you grammar or anything like that but have you learned like to do this; hi, Hello (I'm just saying these things for an example) and bye. You don't have to change it's ok but just giving you something but the rest of it is really good Amy :)
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Sarah
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Jan. 30, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by diamondsintherough
Would it be better if you had NOT been bored? Just wondering. Very creative, daughter. I hope that is not what you think of my cooking.
Mom
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Feb. 10, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by writer4him
Very imaginative poem! I need to add this blog to my friends list so I can see when you update it :-). Great job on your writing!
~writer4him
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Feb. 15, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Bookwriter
That was good! There is nothing to change. I know I already said thank you for the template but I wanted to thank you again.
Beth (or Bethany)
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Feb. 18, 2008 - suggestions

Posted by GotGod22
Why do you sneeze?
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Feb. 25, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by skmarlow
Hey, what a fun poem!
I like the pic you added, too. Did you make this up when you had to eat stew one night for supper? LOL
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Mar. 14, 2008 - Oh, the Memories!

Posted by WisdomBuilders
I was around 9 or 10 when I began writing, also. I have little ones of my own now, and my passion for writing has never ended! I just want to encourage you to continue as long as you still enjoy it.
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