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Mar. 13, 2009
Another unfishished story
I found this story in the drafts in my list of entries... What a weird place to keep it! LOL! First, I wrote an "about me" (me is the main character), and then I "started" the first chapter... Here is the about me:
My name is Erika Lou Maybury. I absolutely despise my name. Erika is okay, but Lou? Its awful!
I'm 11 years old. I have waist long brown hair that never behaves. Its always flying all over so I usually just give up and leave it down after trying to brush it. I don't wear glasses but I think they look neat. Most of the time I'm a pretty nice girl but when I mad, I'm MAD, and when I'm happy I'm Happy. So you don't want me to get mad. :-)
Ever since I can remember I've loved adventure. The only really exciting thing (it wasn't even that exciting) that happened to me was when I was rock climbing (with ropes and everything). I was going up a really steep rock and I had just ducked under a tree branch when my rope broke and I fell against the tree. I knew if I moved I'd fall so I stayed there until my brother Jeff came and helped me. He is 16. Jeff is very protective of me and we are very close.
Then there is my 15 year-old sister, Courtney, who is always carrying a mirror around to admire herself, and can't ever find the good side of things. She can only find the bad side. It gets annoying sometimes... I don't like her as much as I do Jeff, but sometimes she can be a lot of fun. That is, when she gets rid of her mirror and starts looking at the good side of things!
I usually don't mind being the youngest but sometimes when people say that I'm "too little" to do this or that, I get mad. I'm not little! I'm 5 feet and 8 inches tall--tall for my age.
I know I said the ONLY thing that was exciting that happened to me was when my rope broke but I guess I forgot about this:
(you can read about "this" when I post the first chapter )
And here is the "first chapter". If anyone would like to finish this for me, go ahead!
I awoke one morning and I felt like something unusual was going to happen. Then I noticed that something unusual was happening! I was shrinking!!! In a few minutes I was only about 5 inches tall instead of 5 feet tall! Now I'm the size of the Littles! (The Littles is a series written by John Lawrence Peterson) I always wondered what it was like to be this size and now I'll find out. Then I noticed that my surroundings where changing too! In a few seconds I was inside this room with little furniture and my family was there too but they were the same size as me.
"Wow! Its like we went and visited the Little's house! I always wanted to do this!" I exclaimed.
"It might be exciting to you Erika, but you are only 11 and I bet you haven't even though of any things that could be bad about this. For one, how are we going to get big again, and two, we don't know anything about our surroundings. We might be in grave danger!" retorted my sister Courtney. |
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Mar. 28, 2009 - Untitled Comment
That is an interesting story! There used to be a TV show called "Geoprge Shrinks" were he was tiny but nobody else in his family. So we say we want to be like George Shrinks and play in the dollhouse. :) lol
Amber was going to write a story like the Littles too but she kinda gave up. So I said I will try sometime....
Post more of that story!!
Amber told me that you are getting glow in the dark! good, you did what I suggested, LOL Post pictures sometime when it is nighttime! LOL
Have a great day, just needed to visit.
Anna