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Sep. 17, 2008
Treasure!

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Treasure!
"Jimmy? Can you please go out side and dig some holes for our new trees? Daddy has been too busy to do it and you've been wanting to use the new shovel, so here is your chance," Mrs. Fisher asked her nine year-old son.
    "Sure Mom! I'll go do that right now!" exclaimed Jimmy. He quickly put on his shoes and ran out side. Soon he was happily digging away. Suddenly his shovel hit something hard! Jimmy had a big imagination so his first though was I bet it's treasure! Probably some pirates hid a treasure chest and meant to come find it but something happened, so it's still here! He didn't even stop to think about the fact that pirates weren't in Colorado. Jimmy started to dig extra fast and soon he had a great big hole. But to his disappointment, his "treasure" was only a big rock.
    When Jimmy went in to eat lunch he told his mom all about it.
    "Oh well, maybe you'll find treasure someday. Dad wanted me to go pick up one more tree for the back yard. Would you mind digging the hole later?"
    "No, I don't mind. I had lots of fun. Maybe I'll find treasure this time! Real treasure and not a rock. Can I come with you?" asked Jimmy. He loved to go to Home Depot where they got the trees, but they didn't go very often.
    "Actually, I think that you have some chores to do that should have been done earlier. Am I right?"
    "Yes, Mommy, I still have chores to do. Thanks for reminding me. I'll do them while you are gone. That way I can dig right when you get back," replied Jimmy, slightly disappointed that he couldn't go, even though he knew that he should have gotten his chores done earlier.
    "Okay, I'll see you later!" Mrs. Fisher called as she walked out the door.
    Jimmy went and gathered all the trash cans to empty them, and when he was done with that he got out the vacuum so he could vacuum his room. After that he did a few other things around the house and sat down in a chair with his favorite book.
    In about a half hour his mom pulled into the drive way. Jimmy ran out to meet her.
    "Can I dig now?" asked Jimmy bouncing around his mother.
    "No, I'm sorry but Dad wanted to take you out for ice cream," his mother said. "You can dig right when you get back."
    "All right! I like ice cream better than digging anyway," he exclaimed.
    Jimmy enjoyed his ice cream tremendously, and then as soon as he got home he grabbed the shovel and started to dig. He noticed that his mother had already started a little hole where he was supposed to put the big tree. This time when his shovel hit something hard he didn't get excited because he was afraid it would be a rock again. But this time he wasn't disappointed!     It was a treasure chest! He saw a key tied to it and quickly opened it up. Inside it was a new game he had wanted for a while, and some chocolate bars.
    "MOM! Come look at this!!!"Jimmy yelled and ran inside. "Some pirates left a treasure chest with just the things I wanted in it!"
    "Wow! How exciting!" Jimmy's mom said. Then Jimmy noticed a little twinkle in his mom's eye, and he said, "Did you put that out there?" But his mom never did tell him.
The End

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May. 21, 2008
Summertime

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I was looking at one of our old 3rd grade spelling books when I saw a challenge. It said to write a story called Summertime using as many words from list 34 (below). So I did that! Here is the  list:



And here is the story. The spelling words are highlighted:
Summertime

It was summertime so Bettie’s family was on vacation. First they went to the library, and Bettie got to get her favorite book, Caddie Woodlawn, by Caroline Ryrie Brink. Then her grandparents met them at the pond with a picnic.

“We wanted to have a barbecue, but it didn’t’ turn out,” said Bettie’s grandpa wiping the perspiration from his forehead. “At least we have this watermelon and lemonade to cool off with. The sunshine is so hot!”

“How about we go swimming?” suggested Bettie’s brother Jack. “I’d also like to try sailing the boat that I finished building last week.”

“That’s a great idea!” exclaimed Bettie. She finished her food, and took off her shoes, and soon she was running barefoot towards the pond. She jumped in with a huge splash, which scared away a family of frogs and a cloud of mosquitoes.

“Oh no! I forgot to take off my sunglasses and when I dived in, I lost them!” cried Bettie. “I’ll dive in and find them for you,” said Jack whipping out a pair of goggles from his back pocket.

“Where did those come from?” asked Bettie in a tone of bewilderment. But Jack was already in the pond.

A few moments later, Jack came up gasping for breath with his arms full. He had Bettie’s sunglasses, a baseball, a gardening tool, and a hat that said “Camping at Camp Snookelwickles” on the front of it!

“It’s a regular field of treasures down there!” exclaimed Jack as he dumped his treasures at the edge of the pond and dived in again.

Bettie grabbed her sunglasses and put them on the table so she wouldn’t lose them again. When she got back to the pond, she saw a little girl her age swimming! They immediately became friends and Bettie told her all about the day --- losing her sunglasses and all! The other girl told Bettie all about her day --- they had gone sightseeing in Paris, caught a plane to Florida and there they were!

“It was barely even daylight when we got on the plane, but now the sun is going down!” said the other girl.

“You’re right! I hadn’t noticed. I’d better get going. I see my family packing up,” said Bettie, climbing out of the pond.

“Bye! Oh wait! I never found out your name! I’m Olivia Brown,” Olivia said.

“Olivia! What a pretty name! My name is Bettie. It was a pleasure meeting you!” called Bettie from over her shoulder. She turned around one last time and waved.

“Wow! There is so much humidity in the air and I can see a thunderstorm coming toward us! What a change from the nice weather we had earlier,” said Bettie’s dad. “Are we all ready to go? Wait, where is Jack?”

“Here I am Dad,” said Jack coming up from behind them with his arms full of things he found at the bottom of the pond.

“Well then, lets go!” said Bettie’s dad.

They all waved good bye to their grandparents and got into the van.

That night when Bettie went into Jack’s bedroom to say goodnight she said, “Thanks for getting my sunglasses Jack. Where did you get those sunglasses anyway?” wondered Bettie, but Jack was already asleep. She lay down on her bed and suddenly a thought popped into her mind: tomorrow was Independence Day! She fell asleep wondering what they would do then.


I copied it from a Microsoft Word document so it doesn't look the best but I'm to lazy to fix it.
I hope you enjoyed it!
Amy

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Oct. 26, 2007
Eraser Story

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One day, my mom took me the store to buy a pencil. I looked at the rack of pencils for a while and finally decided I wanted the one that had pianos on it.  When we got home, I sharpened it right away. I still had to do math, so I got my math book and started writing. I got to a math problem (one that I didn’t like) and got it wrong. I was very mad, because it had taken me a long time to solve it. Then I thought of a good thing about it: I would get to use the eraser on the pencil. I always liked using an eraser for the first time, because it was so clean and new.

I turned the pencil over, and was about to erase, when I heard a little voice, so small that I could barely hear it, say, “Stop!” I looked around to see where the voice came from. I didn’t see anything, so I started to erase again. “Stop! Don’t erase!” This time it was a little louder and it scared me. I thought that it sounded like it was coming from my eraser, so I looked all over my eraser, and saw a little smiley face. It smiled at me, and suddenly an arm stuck out of the pencil and motioned for me to come closer! I was so surprised that I fell over and said, “WOW,” very loudly. The hand raised to the lips on the smiley face and motioned “sh.” I leaned closer, and it whispered, “Keep me a secret, and later, I will tell you about myself.” I quickly acted as though nothing had happened and kept doing my math. About a minute later, I remembered the problem that I had gotten wrong. I looked at the eraser, and it smiled at me.

I whispered, “How will I erase if I can’t use this eraser?” “You can use this one,” and the hand popped out of the pencil holding a regular eraser. I took it, whispered,
“Thanks,” and went on doing my math. I was very excited, and I had a lot of questions to ask the eraser.


*  *  *

“Time to go to bed,” my mother called. I usually did not want to bed, but tonight I was very excited because of the eraser. I tried not to act too excited, because then my mom would ask why I was in such a hurry to go to bed. Soon, all the goodnight hugs and kisses were over, (I usually would drag out hugs and kisses) and I shut the door. (I would always shut the door at night. Just so you don’t think that I did that because I was going to talk to my eraser!) I had smuggled the pencil into my bedroom when I put my pajamas on. I took the pencil out from under my pillow.

“Are you a person?” I asked the eraser. I felt so silly talking to a pencil!

“I do not know what I am. I guess the machines made me forget,” came the reply. “All I know is that I would like to get out of here. I suppose you wouldn’t like to tear apart your eraser though. I just might be here a while.”

“You are right that I would not want to rip my eraser, because what if my mother asked what happened to my eraser? What would I tell here? You said that you went through machines. What was it like? Do you know what you look like? I guess I could rip my eraser. I really want to get you out.” I kept talking and asking questions, giving the eraser no time to answer any of my questions.

“Please do rip your eraser!” the voice sounded very excited! “Didn’t I already tell you that I didn’t know what I looked like? Maybe I didn’t. I will tell you about the machines once I get out of here.” I had to decide if I was going to rip my eraser, which meant that I would have to tell my mother, or leave whatever was in my eraser in there. I really wanted to see what the thing looked like! I thought for a moment, and then I said, “I will rip the eraser, but how am I supposed to do it without hurting you?”

“I will shrink so I am so tiny that you won’t even be able to see me!” I had no idea how this strange, awesome, amazing thing was going to do it, but I said, “Okay.” I didn’t want eraser bits all over my bed, so I got out of bed and went over to the trash can to rip. Soon the job was done, and I saw a tiny figure that looked like a human being.

“You look like a human, but you can’t be one, because humans cannot shrink.”

“Oh well, I do not care how I look. Can I lie down on your pillow by you? If you are wondering, I can talk just as loud as you, and I can scream so loud, that once, I was about to be smashed so I screamed as loud as I could and the person the was going to smash me, became deaf. Never mind that. Let me tell you about the machines. They were so loud that I thought that my ears would blow up! No, loud couldn’t describe it. These machines were loud, roaring, deafening, earth shaking, window rattling, rapid, speedy, quick, dashing, rushing, and tearing along! Well, I didn’t enter this pencil till it was in the store, but I was at the pencil factory watching everything that happened. Here is how pencils are made. 
 
 First there cedar wood is cut into square blocks called pencil blocks. Then a machine cuts the blocks into slices called pencil slats. Then the pencil slats are then waxed and stained.”
 “Wow! It must have taken a while!” I said.
 “Well, the machines were very fast. They had to be because thousands of pencils are made each day! Did you know that more than 2 billion pencils are used in the United States every year! So they have to make a lot! On with the story. After they wax and stain the wood, a machine cuts groves in the slats. Writing cores, which are really lead are put in the grooves. Then they take another grooved slat and glue it onto the one with lead, and so it looks like a sandwich. Then another machine cuts the sandwiches into a whole bunch of pencil shapes and they are sanded smooth. Then each pencil is painted. As you can tell, this takes a lot of machines and a lot of blades! Then after they paint the pencil, the metal ring up by the eraser is put on, and then the eraser got put into place.” 

 “Wow! So where did you come along?” I asked.
 

“I came along when the were going to ship off the pencils. I decided to take a ride, so I jumped into that one that you bought, and then a man picked up a whole handful of pencils and wrapped us in plastic. It got super hot in there! Just when I thought I was going to die, someone else unwrapped us. But we aren’t to that part of the story. Along with a bunch of wrapped pencils we were thrown into boxes. It was so dark that I couldn’t see my own hand! After a very long ride, the box was lifted out of the truck, and I could see some light come in through the cracks of the box! Well, then we were all unwrapped and I could finally breathe! We were thrown into a plastic bin and I sat there waiting! Then you came along and bought me! That is all there is to tell!”
 

“What a story! I think that we will have lots of fun together!” I said.

 “Me too,” said the eraser.

Well, I hope that you enjoyed it!

Amy


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Oct. 22, 2007
Dough in the Oven

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This story was written a while ago, but it was this year, I entered it into a contest, and it was supposed to be on the topic of something coming up. Enjoy!

 

Dough in the Oven

One spring day, my mother was making bread. Soon she had the dough made and put it in the oven to rise. I decided too watch the bread rise, and see if the rising was visible. Soon I decided it was taking too long so I got a book and came back. Every once in a while I looked at the dough until finally, I saw that it was three inches above the pan!
“Mom!” I yelled. “Come look at the dough.” My mom came and looked into the oven through the window in the door.
“It’s almost done,” she said. Soon the timer went off, and we took it out of the oven, and turned the oven on too preheat. In s few minutes, the oven went beep beep which meant that the oven was preheated. My mom put the bread in the oven and set the timer. When the bread was done, I could now wait for supper to come when we could eat it.

 

Amy


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