The Libary - Lesson 3 of Writing Workshop

The Libary

Jan. 9, 2008

Lesson 3 of Writing Workshop

This is lesson 3 with Mrs. Marlow. Click here to take part in writing lessons.

Character: Joanne Anderson. 11 years old. Has long eyelashes, and long blonde hair, and has rosy cheeks with blue eyes. Tall for her age.

Personality traits: Friendly, forgetful, quick tempered, brave, and fast-thinking.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes horses, She dislikes homework and school because she's always wanting to go out to ride her horse, Stormy and play with her friends.

Character : A black stallion called Stormy. Very friendly, fast like a flash of lightning! A white star in his head, one stocking. 14.3hh

Personal traits: Tame, brave and smart.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes treats, such as carrots or apples, riding with Jo and going for rides. Dislikes strangers and mistreatment.

TTFN! (ta ta for now)

~Bethany~

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Jan. 9, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BookLover

I like her!!! Do you still want me to make you a template?

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Jan. 9, 2008 - Lesson 3

Posted by skmarlow

Nicely done, Bethany! I liked how you gave her not only some good character traits, but also included a negative one ("forgetful"). That makes your character balanced. And....sometimes the negative traits help us think of stories (like a story of what happens when Suzanna forgets something one more time and it causes some unfortunate consequences).
I like Suzanna!
And yes...you did it right.

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Jan. 15, 2008 - Love It!

Posted by emilyemilyemily

I like Suzanna! She is a very believable character.

your friend
Emily:) <><

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Jan. 28, 2008 - ginger

Posted by SuzyScribbles

I like the addition of S's horse, Ginger. You are very good with thinking up names!

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Feb. 28, 2008 - Suzanna

Posted by SavedGirl

I really liked Suzanna and I loved her character trait about being cheeky

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