My Storys

Jan. 9, 2008 - Lesson 3 of Writing Workshop

This is lesson 3 with Mrs. Marlow. Click here to take part in writing lessons.

Character: Joanne Anderson. Has long eyelashes, and long brown hair, and has rosy cheeks with green-gray eyes.

Personality traits: Friendly, forgetful, quick tempered brave, a bit cheeky and adventurous.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes horses, playing with her friends, and tell jokes. She dislikes homework and school because shes always wanting to go out to ride her horse, Penny and play with her friends.

Character : Thunderbolt. His coat is chestnut color and he has to white stockings and a stripe down is nose.

Personal traits: Tame, brave and smart.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes eating apples, riding with Jo and going for hacks. Dislikes strangers.

Well, what did you think? Bethany

Jan. 9, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BookLover

I like her!!! Do you still want me to make you a template?

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Jan. 9, 2008 - Lesson 3

Posted by skmarlow

Nicely done, Bethany! I liked how you gave her not only some good character traits, but also included a negative one ("forgetful"). That makes your character balanced. And....sometimes the negative traits help us think of stories (like a story of what happens when Suzanna forgets something one more time and it causes some unfortunate consequences).
I like Suzanna!
And yes...you did it right.

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