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Here is my writing lesson. I got the part about little red riding hood before I looked at the next page.

Character: Jason Anderson, Joanna's brother.
Setting: Fishing in a creek on a summers day.


This is boring, thought Jason. Patience seemed to have wriggled out of him and replaced it with out any patience at all. It's quite different if I catch a thirty pounder pike but I'm catching nothin'. He opened his lunch parcel and gave tidbits to his dog Jeffery. He didn't mean to but with the long walk to the creek and a big lunch proved to be too much. He fell asleep for about 15 minutes and then he was rudely awaken by Jeffery licking his cheek. Just as well because his fishing rod he left on the ground started to move about! He jumped up and up he pulled a long slimy green spotty pike with a row of short sharp teeth. "A pike," Jason breathed. He couldn't wait till dinner that night!