Jan. 12, 2008 - Story- Tell me what you think!
Here is a story I wrote tell me what you think!
Gertrude lifted her dull brown dress with one hand, while balancing her carry-on in the other only to jump, half trip down the step of the stage. In the process of this graceful act, she dropped her small bag, lost her hat, and turned her skirt a light brown color, from the dust that whipped through the air and covered the ground.
With slow deliberate motions, Gertrude lifted herself up, off the ground and dusted her skirt off. With one quick glance, she surveyed the town almost gasping in surprise. The town, if it could even be called that, consisted of five structures; Monty's General Store, The Golden Tree Tavern, Sunshine Inn, 'Ol Saloon, and Jim Bo's Blacksmith.
Starting from her reverie, Gertrude lifted her dress, grabbed her bag and started walking only to discover her hat gone--not on her head, not in sight.
"Oh, well, It was a old hat anyway." Gertrude thought with a sigh.
That was just a small part of it tell me if you want to hear more!
Oh Happy Happy Day
Comments
Jan. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment
Posted by pianolove
That has a lot of promise, I'd be interested in reading more.
Heather
