Poetic Voice - Song of the Sunrise

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Thoughts, feelings, and poetry of a fifteen-year-old Christian poetess.

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Jun. 9, 2008

Song of the Sunrise

Posted in My Poetry

In the quiet of the waking

Shadows slowly

Whispers deepen

Silence in the dawn-rays

Grass blows gently

All becoming

Trees sigh softly

Almost gone

Gone away

Wind that dances on the prairie

Sing for joy!

Sing the song!

Birds that welcome in the morning

Join the song!

Sing along!

As the stars describe the nighttime

So the light describes the song

So the dawn

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Jun. 9, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by QueenFlora

That is just lovely! I can just feel myself there. wow! you have a lot written in your story! That's just great! Oh by the way come to my blog, I awarded you.
Farewell!
~Queen Flora

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Jun. 11, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by JessicaLynnCampos

Wow, thanks so much for letting me know about what you thought, and I understand your feelings on the school part of the book. I wrote those parts mainly to give a glimpse into the characters overall (like what their strengths and weaknesses are), introduce some major-minor characters of the series (if you can follow me there), and bring in some things that will be very important later.

I did not want to make my series seem as if I'm writing a story mimicking Harry Potter, because I'm -not-, so I decided to only have one book covering their basic Clan education. The next book will cover their Apprenticeships, which involve one-on-one instruction with a Rahm (teacher) and a boat load of other O.O stuff (if I can attempt to briefly sum it up).

I have a favor to ask. If you bought the book off of Amazon could you leave a review? It doesn't have to be in depth or anything, just a simple one would be a big help to me. Thanks so much for buying it and reading it. ^^ :D. I still can't believe you read it so fast.

So, I'm curious, whose your favorite character, if you have one? Why? Do you have any ones you don't like?

So how far are you on your book? How long have you been working on it?

Good luck on continuing (and finishing) your book. Keep me informed of its progress.

Jessica Lynn Campos

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Jun. 17, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Emma

I love it! It's great!

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Jun. 17, 2008 - Are you alright, are you hurt, or sick, lying in some woods just waiting for help!?!

Posted by VintageAuthoress

My dear Cherise! Where have you vanished to? You haven't updated in about a week, which wouldn't alarm me, except that you haven't updated your word count for The Poet of Aenywroe, so I know you can't have vanished into there! Could it be that you have fallen into a trap, and vanished into, into... the real world! *gasps* Please PM me when you get this comment so I can know that you are safe!
~ Katie

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Jun. 18, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by writer4him

Hello Cherise! I'm so sorry I've been away for so long....I seem to be having trouble keeping up with HSB lately! The three columns are looking great....I just love how you display your wordcount!! I think I'll put that on my blog also. Haha, if yours is up to date, we are almost exactly the same...but you're a bit ahead ;-).
Anyhow, I hope to talk to you soon!

~Beth

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Jun. 19, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Meggy T

Wow! Excellent! I'm not that deep!:P Heehee!

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Jun. 20, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by VintageAuthoress

Sorry for not getting back to you sooner, I'm really excited about FAD, so I've been calling Queen Flora every free moment I get. You see, we've changed the plot a bit, it's basically the same thing, but there are a few big changes. Right now we have about 31,558 words. But we're writing more almost everyday now, so it's going to change, of course! When will you update your story blog? I really want to read it!

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Jun. 20, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Narniagirl

Hello,

My name is Kylie, I am 12 years old. Among other things, I love God, Narnia, writing, and reading. I think we might have just a bit in common. ;)

I am friends with Beth aka writer4him, and I've been reading your blog off and on for quite a while. I finally decided to make your acquaintance. I think you have a splendid blog, and your writings are deeper than most but quite enjoyable to read. You seem like you have a kind attitude and a smart mind, and I think that I would enjoy being friends with you. So would you like to be friends?

I am sorry if that sounded too eloquent, but I wanted something a bit more specific than "want to be friends". :) Plus, I enjoy trying out my immense span of vocabulary and using it to its full potential to articulate myself. :P

Have a great weekend!

Blessings,
~Miss Kylie

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Jun. 22, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Turumbar

Beautiful poem! Glad you liked my story.
Alex

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My Writings

This is where you can see what I have written, and the status of my current works:

The Prophet of Einehrowaye - A fantasy novel, currently 64,369 words long! Click here to read the first two chapters!

Tears for the Silent Lands - My NaNoWriMo 2008 novel, currently 81,000 words long! Click here to read an excerpt!

The King of Writer's Block - A fantasy-ish, slightly humorous story, currently 8,450 words!

The Heart of the Wyrkind - Yet another fantasy novel, currently 4,395 words long. If you wish to read the first chapter, click here.

The Absence - A fanfiction oneshot written for A Tale of Two Cities. Click here to read it!

Besides prose, I have also written many poems! Click here to read some of them!

My Story Blog