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Sep. 12, 2008

Moonlight

 

Tonight is a beautiful clear night in Colorado, and on the way home from a friend's house we had the windows down, letting the evening breeze blow past our faces.  The moon is almost full, and the stars are clear even though the past few days even though the past few days have been rainy.  The earth still smells of the moisture.  There are some nights that you can't help but feel awake, no matter how tired you are: nights that you long to run barefoot through open fields under the stars and feel the summer breeze in your hair, dancing by the light of the moon, all your worldly cares melted under the beams of silver.  Oh, to dance...

 

My heart leaves my body and I fly over the midnight plains, swooping over the prairies like a swallow, soaring up to the mountaintops.  The Rockies: land of enchantment to a girl of fourteen.  The scent of pine floats sweetly to my nostrils, and I hear the voices of the streams and waterfalls.  I would choose to live in this dream world, but inevitably I am called back to where I am sitting, back to my life.  I come back, and I remember who I am before I realize that I had forgotten. 

 

I look at the moon and I cannot help but think that this is but a taste of heaven.  In heaven we will dance barefoot under the moon, and our worldly cares will melt: not for a moment, but for all eternity.  Then we will truly be free. 

 

Copyright 2008 by Cherise A. You must ask me before using any of my stuff, and my name must appear along with the poem or post if you reproduce it.


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Sep. 12, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by QueenFlora
Oh Cherise! That is exactly how I feel! You worded it so lovely too! Your post was so encouraging!
~Molly
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Sep. 14, 2008 - Tag

Posted by Hannah11
Cherise,

I've tagged you. Please check it out soon! :D

~*~Hannah~*~
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Sep. 14, 2008 - A night in Missouri

Posted by VintageAuthoress

Your post reminds me of a beautiful few fleeting moments I spent while at my my Aunt Ranch in Missouri.


It was dark, but the moonlight still fell in some patches around the lake. The cabin light was on outside, and there sat Molly, writing an awesome scene for FAD, but I was not there. I stood at the top of a dark hill, wearing a blue Edwardian styled gown, two dogs standing on either side of me. The night was peaceful and calm, but I was not. I was fighting with myself, wanting- longing to run down the dark hill into the field below, but afraid of the unseen. Afraid of what could be lurking in the shadows. I looked down at Matchein, the top of whose head came to my waist, and calling the dogs to me, ran down the dark hill.


It was wonderful, and I got an awesome idea for a story while doing it too! And I wasn't killed by coyote either!


~ Katie



Edited by VintageAuthoress on Sep. 14, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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Sep. 14, 2008 - Thought from Hemlock

Oh that was lovely!
Isn't it such a joy to travel to worlds no one else can reach, I think God smiles at us when we travel, as though he is showing us just a taste of Heaven, as though us with over active imaginations can better see it.
And th esilvery moon, oh to dance under its beams, shinning over us seeming to simle upon us. After the rain, when the world is washed fresh and new, so clean and young feeling! I fost nigh breezes whispering through our hair, all fades and for a time we are alone, alone with the moon light and all cares fly!
*Sigh* few can reach there I am learning, I am glad you can! So glad!
Thank you for sharing!
Isilwen of Hemlock
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Sep. 14, 2008 - Greetings!

Posted by Maddock
Lovely template My lady!
Greetings, it is Maddock
I wanted to come and say thank you for your comment! I am glad I was able to inspire you, I am thankful for any help I can offer.
And I am eager to get to know you better.
Maddock of Hemlock
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Sep. 15, 2008 - From Heather

Posted by TheFates
Thank you! I am glad you liked the song and thank you for the suggestion!I had set it to the tune of the Highwayman, ever heard that song? It is one of my favorites, and it sounded pretty nice with that tune, but I thought it looked horrible with just the words. I shall look over it again and sing it a few more times, maybe I can fix it some.
But once again thank you,
Heather, authoress of Hemlock
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Sep. 15, 2008 - WoOoOoW!

Posted by Equestrienne21
I love the new template..fancy!! I'm still thinking up names and characters to my story..so, yeah...
I love the "Moonlight"; it is so desciptive...sometimes I feel I am carried away to..to..to a wonderful nightime place that I can't describe, while looking at the moon and thinking about the mountains.

Love ya,
Equestrienne

Edited by Equestrienne21 on Sep. 15, 2008 at 5:03 PM
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Sep. 15, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BookLover
You did it!!! You actually changed your template!!! :-)
I was very dissapointed to find out that you DID change your password because it meant no more hacking... :-)
Amy
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Sep. 16, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous
I LOOOOOOOVE the new template!!!!! It's gorgeous!!! I'll see you Friday, right?
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Sep. 16, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous
Oh, that was Outlawed Princess, sorry!:D
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Sep. 16, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by QueenFlora
Oh Cherise!!!
Your template is beautiful! It's so, so lovely!! Did you do it? Anyhow, I love it! It came upon a shock when I clicked on your blog and suddenly I saw this beautiful picture of a waterfall....*peaceful sigh*
I shall talk to you later! May your pen ever stay sharp!!!
~Molly
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Sep. 17, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Emma
I liked your entry! Really like the new look of the blog! Hope you have a good day and see you soon! Also could I do the Nanowrimo thing too? If so what do I have to do to sign up etc.? See you soon! :}
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Sep. 17, 2008 - Beautiful new look!

Posted by WordLady
Hi, my dear,

Wow, love your new blog look. It's YOU! Great colors and font.

Love your moonlight description; I've felt exactly the same way here. And I want to say...you are doing a wonderful job in your writing! I'm proud of your commitment to excellence. It's a joy to be one of your 'writing buddies.'

Blessings,
WL
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Sep. 17, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by writer4him
Hello, Cherise! I was just noticing another minor problem with the template--the bullets for the Friends and Links sections are still the old ones. Which is fine if you don't mind. Otherwise, you could grab the bullet code from Recent Posts or something and replace the old one. Sorry about that!

~Beth
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Sep. 18, 2008 - From Isilwen...er...Theobald

Posted by TheFates
*Bows* My lady, it is good to hear from you and glad I am of it for I am starting to feel lonesome now that Maddock has taken over our little tale.
*Maddock takes over* I do know, after talking with her, that Heather has at least two other books planned in which I am to appear, more so in the second then the third and she is tossing about the idea of doing a fourth. However, I still feel there is something sad about ending Hemlock....
*Heather here* Sigh, I am having to share a computer with two men from my imagination. Oh well, there are wrose things I guess.
As eager as I am to complete Hemlock I cannot help but agree with Maddock, in a way Hemlock has become as real to me as this earth and though I won't be saying good bye to it, as I am writing other books set in Hemlock, there is something sad knowing I shall never be able to write on Hemlock, the book, again. I shall never be able to weave, for what part I even weave, this tale with these characters at that age. In the next they will be older and everything will be changed...odd how sad that makes the author feel :D.
However, oh I do not think for one moment that you would steal my story :D. In fact, that was not a bad idea...if you would like to try it you can. Sadly Maddock's who life it planned out and as loth as he may be to admit it, I have four books ready which will complete his tale.
However, if you ever did want to write a book set in Hemlock I would not mind at all. :D
I am also thinking Maddock is just sore because I am writing a book about when Theobald was younger. He just had a more exciting childhood then Maddock, Maddock's was boring until he was 17...anyways, I suppose I had better go.
Until next time I bid thee adieu
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Sep. 18, 2008 - <em>Untitled Comment</em>

Posted by Ness
Lovely new template!
It fits you blog, very nicely:)
I love your moonlight 'thoughts' There very beautiful I somtimes think things like that but I never really write them. Thanks for sharing them with us!
Ness
PS Do you live in the rockies? Lucky, Lucky, Lucky!!!

Edited by Ness on Sep. 18, 2008 at 1:33 PM
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Sep. 19, 2008 - Greetings

*Sigh* Yes, I am rather sad to be making poor Hemloca and Lacklan's tale a tradgidy, but I am glad you are liking it!
Thank you for the comments, sorry it took me so long to get back to you, I somehow over looked them!
Isilwen of Hemlock
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Sep. 20, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by OutlawedPrincess
My darling, thou must post upon thy experiences in the wonderful world of flag football!!!! I insist!!!:P
I love you sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MEEEEE
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Sep. 20, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous
You are quite talented. Have you sonsidered sending yoiur ideas inro a card cmpany?Don't mention your agew at first.It could be some nice money until yoiu get published. Leena
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Sep. 22, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Westilisette
I have danced in the light of the moon before. It was a full moon and it was winter and we lived on a farm and we went to see the lambs, alraight now I remember it was March, and the lamds were all newborn lambs. They were in the barn. And that was when we lived in Scotland and I was ten.
Chezdak
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Sep. 22, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Emma
I love how you put it! You have an amazing way with words! I would love to dance under the moon. Want to come?:D Well I will see you soon! Hopefully I'll see you there on Sunday, I saw you yesterday at church and I was going to come over to talk to you but I got caught. Oh by the way, even though you don't really know who Glodek is I just wanted you to know that he is home and safe from Iraq. YAY! See you soon, and Happy Birthday Early {HBE!}
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