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Nov. 10, 2007 - Essay writing class... critique of an argument

Had to write this for my essay writing class. This was my favorite assignment, I won’t lie. The object was not to take a stance on an issue, I was only supposed to critique the validity of the argument, and explore whether or not it was logically presented. Here’s the result!

 

Exploration of an Argument

Energy Drinks- Harmless or Hazardous?

 

The growing energy drink industry is rapidly capturing the public attention. In “Spiked!”, an article in Reader’s Digest, Katharine Mieszkowski unveils the hidden dangers caused by the popular caffeine-rich beverages. She does not attempt to hide her opinion of the energy drink industry, nor does she mask the dangers haunting young consumers. The author uses statistics, quotes from experts, and credible research to support her stand.

 

Statistics and numbers are used in the article to support the topics being addressed. For example, the article states, “Nearly 30 percent of all teens actually fall asleep in class at least once a week.” There were no stated sources for the statistic. To maintain a certain level of credibility, the author should have revealed the source of her information. However, the author also writes, “Nearly half of kids 11 to 17 years old don’t get the minimum eight hours [of sleep] a night, according to the National Sleep Foundation.” This is a more reliable statistic, since it originated from a credible source.

 

The author also quotes five experts to back up her argument. Two are medical doctors, one is an energy drink connoisseur, and the remaining two are nutrition and emergency medicine experts. She did not obviously attempt to present only opinions that would support her argument, yet they all shed a favorable light on her position. She also provides quotes from a teen that suffered from side effects caused by caffeine overdoses. These sources are all credible, since they are provided by experts and eyewitnesses.

 

Research from credible sources was provided in the article. She cited findings from a 2003 study conducted by Ohio State University. The study showed that seventh, eighth, and ninth graders stay up later and are more tired when they drink lots of caffeine. This is also reliable, since the research was conducted and sanctioned by a well-known, trustworthy organization.

Ms. Mieszkowski seems to have a sound base for her argument. She supported each claim very thoroughly by citing well-known sources, experts, and research findings. She did not approach the topic from an obviously biased view, but she did manage to communicate her position in a polite but firm manner. I would conclude that the article contains a sound, believable, and logical argument.

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Sep. 1, 2007 - Worldviews

Here is a report I wrote yesterday for school. I'm going to present it in an oral presentation today. All the kids in our family have to do an oral report every week... down to the three year old.

 

Worldviews and America

Explaining Worldviews and How Their Popular Expressions Shape and Direct Our Culture

There are six broad categories of worldviews, including Christianity, Islam, Secular Humanism, Marxism-Leninism, Cosmic Humanism (or New Age), and Post-Modernism. A worldview is the framework of basic beliefs we have, consciously or sub-consciously, that shapes our view of and for the world. Everyone has a worldview. Each worldview is comprised of different views on Theology, Philosophy, Ethics, Biology, Psychology, Sociology, Law, Politics, Economics, and History. Each worldview derives its morals and beliefs from a different source, i.e. the Bible, the Qur’an, the writings of Shirley MacLaine, the Humanist Manifesto, etc. The four very broad Worldview categories are Naturalism, Transcendentalism, Theism, and Post-Modernism.

 

Naturalists believe that nothing is real except nature. Matter is all that exists. Carl Sagan, a Naturalist, said, “The Cosmos is all there is, all there ever was and all there ever will be.” The universe is self-created, and science is the key to truth. Each person determines his/her own purpose. Naturalism is expressed through Atheism, Agnosticism, Scientific Naturalism, Secularism, Darwinism, Hedonism, Existentialism, and some Modern Psychology. Two main Naturalistic Worldviews are Secular Humanism and Marxism. It advocates taking things at face value, as we see them.

 

Another worldview type is Transcendentalism. Cosmic Humanism is tied into Transcendentalism to some extent. Transcendentalists believe that nothing is real, that nature is God. Everything is God; each person is a part of the greater “One”. Truth is not rational, and it is in each person. Each person determines his or her own purpose through “looking within”. Transcendentalism can be linked to Yoga, Meditation, Astrology, and many other more subtle expressions. Radical Environmentalism stems from Transcendentalism.

 

Theists believe that God is real, and actively involved, and that he took at least some part in the creation of nature, physical and spiritual. They believe that God exists, and we are a special creation directly created by God. Truth comes from reason, revelation, and experience. Morality stems from obedience of God’s will and instruction. Islam, Judaism, and Christianity are all Theistic Worldviews. We can’t prove that God exists, but we can provide evidence with Cosmological, Teleological, Ontological, Religious Experience, Human Consciousness, and Moral reasoning. Augustine said, “From nothing, nothing comes” meaning that something or someone was involved in the creation and foundation of the earth. Theism when expressed through Christianity is very different from that expressed by Islam and Judaism. In Judaism, God has revealed Himself as just and merciful, and the Messiah has not come, but his return is imminent. Islamic belief states that God has revealed Himself as just and vengeful, and the judgment is coming. Christians believe that God is just and merciful, as revealed by His Son and by history, and He is going to return.

 

Postmodernism is rapidly growing in popularity, in fact, nobody knows how many Postmodernists there are at this time. Postmodernists can also fall into the Cosmic and Secular Humanist categories, so it is hard to categorize them. Postmodernism belief states that the ultimate questions (i.e. origin, morality, destiny, etc.) are unknowable. Life is random and chaotic, nothing is sacred, everything is questioned, there is no progress, no moral absolutes with morality based on situation and choice, people have no fixed identity, traditional institutions (home, Church, state) are broken, reality is socially constructed and is still being constructed. Postmodernists operate from a “life has let me down”, “you can’t judge me because you don’t know me” perspective. With this Worldview, the belief is that since all worldviews are valid, none are true. Postmodernism is expressed through anti-realism, deconstruction, anti-metanarrative revision, multiculturalism, political correctness, and through Dada and Pop-nihilistic art.

 

H.G. Wells said, “If there is no God, nothing matters. If there is a God, nothing else matters.” Understanding the worldviews of others is helpful in relating to people. Also, it becomes easier to understand the turns made in culture, and explains reasoning behind decisions that are made. For example, Naturalists would see nothing wrong with abortion, because, following their reasoning, if people are evolved by random chance, humans have little or no value. Since Transcendentalists believe that nature is God, radical environmentalism becomes a big issue in their mind. In destroying nature, you are destroying God. Worldviews are a large part of the world today, and although very few people realize it, worldviews shape our culture in many ways.

Ok, that's it. I was afraid that when I was put on the spot with questions, that the answers would fly right out of my head, so I wrote some notes. I'll incude my notes on the topic below, since I'm not here to explain the -isms and the bigger words. You may already know what they mean, but it's here if you need it.

Definitions…

Naturalism:

Atheism- belief in NO God

Agnosticism- no one can be sure

Scientific Naturalism- all knowable truth comes from science

Secularism- religion has no place in public

Darwinism- Darwinian evolution, lowers human value

Hedonism- life is for pleasure

Existentialism- “Carpe Diem”, life has no ultimate meaning, you have to make meaning.

 

Theism:

Cosmological- there is something instead of nothing

Teleological- there is design in the world

Moral- Why do we have an idea of right and wrong?

Human Consciousness- Why are humans different from animals?

Ontological- Where did we get the idea of God if he doesn’t exist?

Religious Experience- The argument of a changed life

 

Postmodernism:

anti-realism (philosophy)- reality is a social construct

deconstruction (literature) - there is no meaning in any text

anti-metanarrative revision (history)- revising what is known of history

multiculturalism (Sociology)- all societies have equally valid stories.

political correctness (politics)- politics is reduced to power

Dada and Pop-nihilistic art- showing that life is fragmented and without substance

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Jul. 7, 2007 - Poem: Say "No" to Joe

Say "No" to Joe

My head is resting on my keyboard
I can’t hold my eyes open
I am writing indecipherable words
Am I going out of my gourd?
 
Must stay awake, I need some Joe
I’m afraid the sudden caffeine rush
Will make me certifiably crazy
Cause all I usually drink is H2O
 
This isn’t so bad. Why was I fearful?
The caffeine is working well!
I am awake for good now…
Uh, oh. I’m starting to get an eyeful!
 
I’m seeing spots.
Lots of spots.
Is this normal?
I thinks nots.
 
Oh, pink elephants now!
Will it ever stop?
Bring me back my water,
Take away the Joe!
 
There is something in this coffee
That makes me go berserk!
Is it just the caffeine,
Or is it just me?

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Jul. 7, 2007 - Welcome!

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