Another Chapter
Sep. 18, 2007

This is a very short entry because Jadon did it and that is why there are so many Typos but here is the next chapter of 'THAT STORY'

The slimy tentacles of the sea monster wrapped around Jake’s left ankle, then his right. The tenttacles jerked and he was yanked off his feet and dragged along his mke-shift raft. Terrified, Jake threw out his hands in the hope of catching on to something to slow him down. His right hand closed around the knife that he’d found floating in the wrick. A butter knif. A blunt, plastic-handled butter knife.

            Insignificant as it was, Jake gripped it like his life depended o n it, which it did. The occtopus swam down innto the deep ocean water, pulling Jake with it. Jake, who had taken a deep breath just in time, plunged the knife into one of the tentacles. It went in all right, all the way up to the hilt, but the occtopus didn’t seem to mind. Now Jake could make out two giganctic eyes, glowing faintly. A hole opened in its face, and Jake was drawn toward it. He had a plan, but doubted whethe he’d have enough oxygen to carry it out.

            The mouth widened, and Jake noticed its repulsive insides with mild distaste. His mind began to get foggy. He felt like sleeping. Jake shook himself. This was no time to conk out. The eyes of the occtopus throbbed at its pray. This was not the first time it had eaten one of these creatures. The fat ones were best. They had a distinct and scrumptious taste of sugar and grease. This one wasn’t fat, but it would do nicely anyway. The occtopus popped Jake onto its mouth and let go of his legs. But this is where the tenticled terror’s troubles began. The dumb human wouldn’t let ago. Annoyed, the octopus gave its tentacle a small jerk.

             Then a big jerk. An enormas jerk Its began thrashing around, trying to get rid of its would be dinner. Furiouse and annoyed, the octopus gave up and raised its prey to ets eye to have a look at it. SCLUG!! It felt a blunt mtle object being jammed into it’s eye. A searing pain shout through its huge body, frome its head to the tips of of all eaight tenticals.

Peace-Wotcher-(and all that) quadguys

Comments

Sep. 19, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Yoshiyahu

don't you know that octipisses have just little tiny beaks? Like a cockatoo. And they slowly nibble their food up. Cheerio!
Yoshiyahu

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Sep. 20, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Dawn90

Nice story. Ummm......what else can i say in this comment?? Nothing I guess....so bye!
Oh I thought of something. When will yoshi or buger do an entry??????

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