Before you read this please read The Picnic- Part 1 .

            I can't believe my eyes. It looks more like a carnival is going on than a picnic. Kids are running around and flapping their arms as if they're chickens. Don't these mothers have control over their own children? They're just sitting on some benches talking, completly ignoring their rowdy kids. Take those boys, eating hot dogs with mustard all over their faces.

          Can't they chew with their mouths closed? Some children are stepping on empty soda cans and creating such a horrible racket. My eardrums hurt from listening to the shouts and screams of these kids. I didn't even know they were capable of producing sounds that loud. They're louder than a train's whistle.

           These people must have burnt down a whole forest to make the air this smoky. It makes me sick to smell all those blackened hot dogs.

Whose point of veiw do you yourself feel it resembles?