• Jul. 18, 2006
My PoEmS!~

hey yalls,

ive written some poems and i'll post them for yall and tell me what u think please! thanx bunchies!

Take my hand

Your kiss like the midnight moon,

Your smile like the sunsets glow,

Take my hand and lets go.

Go away from this world,

Away from this land,

and we can go there, if you take my hand!

Always keep you mine

I love you, but you dont know it,

I love you, but I cant show it.

Even if you dont mean it,

tell me a lie,

and i'll always keep you mine!

Never heard of such

I hear whispersin the night,

strange sounds that give me a fright.

I hear them often,

maybe too much,

Strange sounds,

ive never heard of such! 

The more I hear

My heart is beating,

beating fast,

so fast I dont think I can last.

The more I listen,

the more  hear,

and know the end s near!

You dont mind

Your the one,

the one and only,

enen though I feel so lonely.

I need you here

by my side,

And I hope that u dont mind!

sooooo! wat did yall think?!?! if u like them please leave me a comment or two!

well ttyl

<33

"kiss kiss"

tAyLoR!~

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Comments

• Jul. 18, 2006
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Posted by justaname

Great poems! I've never been to china but someone from my old church has.

Ttyl,
Jenny

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• Jul. 18, 2006
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Posted by justaname

for some reason i've never wanted to go to haiwaii lol. i'd rather go somewhere out of the usa

Ttyl,
Jenny

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• Jul. 18, 2006
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Posted by justaname

like austrailla or holland. i have IM but i'm not allowed to use it

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• Jul. 18, 2006
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Posted by justaname

yep

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• Jul. 18, 2006
Tag

Posted by daffodilgirl

1. Your favorite bored game you have?



2. Your favorite movie you have?


3. Your favorite book?



4. Your favorite toy?



5. Your favorite Super-Hero?



6. Your dream room? (In short.)



7. Seven things you've always wanted to get.


8. Favorite computer game.



9. Favorite TV show.



10. Favorite food.



11.What three people are you going to tag?

- Daffodilgirl -

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• Jul. 18, 2006
Poems

Posted by OutdoorGirl

Those are some really good poems. I like writing poetry. So far I've gotton 2 published. If you want to, go to poetry.com and you can enter your poems online.

Comment back and tell me how it goes.

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• Nov. 17, 2006
Nice blog

Posted by Zechariah

Very nice poems, did you right them? Sometimes I'll right one or two, but I gotta be in the right mood=)

Zech

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