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Posted by SavedGirl

Dear Sarah,

Are you sure that they went through? Where did you post them. When I go to her site it doesn't show your comments on the lessons. Maybe you should try reposting the comments.

Lulu

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Posted by skmarlow

Oh, I like Rachel! She sounds like a lot of fun. I'd like to see what she looks like, too, however. Can you add a couple of sentences (look at your notes from the last lesson) and write it out. Also...does she have anything she needs to work on in her character? (stubborn? Impatient? temper?). Like I mentioned in the previous comment, nobody is perfect. Characters need to grow, so they need to have a FEW faults in the beginning.

When you go over this, let me know and I'll come back and see it again!

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Posted by skmarlow

Oh, you added the stubborn part. Nice job!
(Do I get to find out what she looks like without having to go back and peek at your lesson 3 notes? Just a sentence or two? Please?) :-)

Oh, I still can't find lesson 7!

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