Batter-up! We haven’t got all day!” Tom shouted.
“Stop yelling,” Katie said.
She grabbed the bat and scowled at her brother. He scowled back.
“No s,” Sean piped up from the pitcher’s mound.
“What do you care? She’s not on your team,” Tom snapped.
Sean glared at Katie for a moment, then shrugged. “Suit yourself. But I’m not going easy on her just ’cause she’s a .” He said
“Who’s asking you to?” Katie said. “Play ball!”
That's the best I could do!
Jun. 24, 2008 - lessson 12
It's taking me a little while to catch up on your lessons. You're going pretty fast.
This lesson was well-done, Sarah. You got it all right, except for these lines:
Stop yelling, Katie said.
She grabbed the bat and scowled at her brother. He scowled back.
It should look like this:
Stop yelling, Katie said. She grabbed the bat and scowled at her brother. He scowled back.
You can put those sentences together because it's still Katie doing the action.
Nice work!
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