Jul. 29, 2009

My Rain Falls

My Rain Falls

by LadyMarian (Copyrighted 2009)

Down, down rain falls
Dropping, dropping so hard
I stay within these walls
Keeping everyone barred.

My feelings so strong
Must be contained
They boil hard and long
They must be detained.

They fill me up inside.
I am quiet still
They think my feelings died
Along with my strong will.

But they are still there
Beating, beating in me
Do I let them out, do I dare
Let everyone see?

My feelings are a rain
Forever falling down
Bearing anger, disdain
In me they are sown.

I must let them out
Before my anger over me reigns
All my anger, fears, and doubts
Appear as tears...my rain.

My rain falls silently
My rain pours out
My rain pounds silently
My rain instead of a shout

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Aug. 12, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous
I love the way you write. It's soooo beautiful.
Sincerely,
~Anonymous
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Aug. 12, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
Secret, mysterious anonymous commenter...who are you? Thank you so much for the comments! Awfully sweet of you! :D But it perks my curiousity right up, wondering who you are! You could be anyone! You could be the girl with the big floppy hat and sunglasses standing on the corner. Or the guy in the long trenchcoat and knee high boots. *nods* Veeeeeery mysterious.
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous
Do you REALLY want to know who I am?
Well then shhhh!
Actually it's no big secret; I am one of HB's sisters. *geeky grin*
~Sarah
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
lol. Welll, it's very sweet of you to leave comments, Sarah. :) Glad you like my poems! :) Do you write poems?
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
Yes, sometimes in fact I will be working on poetry this year for school. I do like to write and read it, but my poems and haiku, etc. are not anywhere near as good as yours. =)
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
I'd love to read some of your poems and haiku if you don't mind sharing them! :) Of course, if you DO mind, don't be afraid to say no! :D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
I'll comment with a couple of my different poems later after I search through the ones I have.
Thanks for inviting me to share some of them Sam!
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
Here are a couple of my poems plus one of my haiku:

I am the Wind:
I am a summer's evening,
I go by with the soft breeze, whistling along the way;
I go through parks where children run and laugh and play. No one knows my name because I never tell.
I am The Wind.

Purple:
Looks like a wonderful sunset,
Tastes like dark blackberries
Smells so fresh and clean,
Feels like friends at ease,
Purple sounds musical and free.

and here is one of my haiku:

God's Love
In the night,
See the light, stars are God's
Love shining to us.

So there you go!
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
Wow! Sarah, those are really, really good! Thank you so much for sharing those with me! I really enjoyed reading them! Have you done anymore writing? Stories?
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
Oh yes, and before I meant to say that:
Yes my poems are pretty short, but I hope to work hard enough to be able to make them longer and better. =D And I don't mind sharing them either! =P Again, thanks for letting me share those with you Sam! ;-D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
They're great...poems don't have to be long to be great. :D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
yes, I do write some short stories occasionally for your sister Olivia, and I'm working on one for Mia and Nate for their Birthdays, because Olivia said they liked the ones I'd written for her. And she told me some of the things that they liked, and I've got loads of ideas already! Most of which will go into the story for them both.
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked them Sam! =D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
That's great that you write stories too! :D Perhaps Nate and Mia will let me read the one you write for their birthdays. :D I'm sure they'll love it! They love stories. :D
And that's awesome that you have so many ideas! :) And I really love the fact that you're really liking writing! :) Victoria and Olivia like to write somewhat, but they don't really write their own stories or poems often. :)
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
I'm sure if you asked them they would probably let you read it to them maybe... I also have two ideas for two different series of stories later on that will remain secret until I finish them! =D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
Sounds great! :D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
And sorry for my bad grammar while commenting!
I'm good at spelling, but just plain bad at grammar! =D
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by LadyMarian
No sweat over the grammar. ;) I'm not perfect at either, and I'm graduated! O_O
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Aug. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Sarah
Hehe! Well I guess anyone of any age, even if they're graduated, they could be bad at grammar. =D
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