"This ain't no ordinary love" - tobyMac

• Oct. 13, 2006
~Chapter Two~

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~Chapter Two~
 
   Charlotte's breath was coming fast, and her heart was beating loud enough for the whole world to hear. This was it. Her time was up. Her hidden sins would finally be opened for all the world to see. She would be hated and scorned. Nicole had been right.
 
   Jeremy tried to sleep.....but it wasn't working out. He always had trouble falling alsleep while in a plane. He turned his head slowly, and jumped when he saw bright green eyes staring back at him.
 
   "What?" Finally, the guy in black had said something!
   "Oh, nothing, I, I just..."
   "Yeah."
  
   Jeremy mentally scolded himself for sounded like such an idiot. What could he say to keep the "conversation" going?
 
   "So, uh, the food was pretty bad, huh?" Lame, Jeremy, so lame.
   "It was okay. I've had worse."
   "Soo, where are you headed?"
   "Fort Peters."
   "Never heard of it." Good, Jeremy thought, the conversation is going
   "Naw, I didn't think you'd know what I was talking about."
 
 
 
There's more suspense in this Chapter....LOL
 
~Bec~

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• Oct. 13, 2006
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Posted by chris

ok... i'm getting lost... i'm trying to remember who is who...

i'll go look at ch1 again...

rn

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• Nov. 24, 2006
it's tazzypirate92 again

Posted by tazzypirate92

sorry if i'm posting to many comments for your chapters. They're really good! Who's your favorite author? Mine's Tamora Peirce!

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