• Oct. 19, 2006
~Chapter Four~
~Chapter Four~
The Plane
Raina saw the two guys talking in front of her. It was kind of funny seeing them try to look uninterested in the conversation and each other; yet they both kept glancing at the other. Plus, the fact that one of them was a loner in all black and the other was a stylishly dressed "golden boy" was quite humorous. She was glad something funny was happening on this trip. when she got to her aunt's, she would have to be "proper". Ugh. Time to get some sleep.
Jeremy woke up to the sun blaring in his eyes. Ian had the shade up, and was quickly scribbling something down on a piece of paper.
"Man, why don you have the shade all the way open?"
"I needed light."
"Well, you certainly have it now."
Ian gave him a hard stare, his eyes a darker shade of green than before.
"Okay, whatever."
"Thank you."
Raina witnessed all this with a smirk on her face. Even when they were irritated with each other, they got along well.
Dawson, Alabama
Nicole tried to read the letter, but the shouting kids made the task nearly impossible. She didn't regret opening the orphanage; it had taken her mind off the baby she'd lost. But sometimes all she wanted was some peace and quiet! Oh well, she'd just read it tonight, after Marcus got back from his trip. He had gone to get a baby boy, who, coincidentally, was named Ian. Having this baby was going to be so hard....
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• Oct. 19, 2006
hey
Posted by iluvhorses
al those chapters are pretty good. i got confused in some parts but then i caught on!!!
Leah
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• Oct. 19, 2006
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Posted by DeKampf
ok i am confused. i don't under stand the second to last paragraph. and to be honest so far i only have Ian and Jeremy figured out.... everybody else i'm having a hard time remembering...
maybe it is just my bad memory...
i like your story! don't get mad, i was giving my thoughts...
rn
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• Oct. 24, 2006
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Posted by Songwriter
hola! ahhh, the story begans to unfold and make sense. I see...I like it! that chapters are too short! I shall be checking in more often now.
Songwriter <><
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• Oct. 29, 2006
AWESOME
Posted by MilkyWay
it is a good story keep postin it
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• Oct. 30, 2006
cool
Posted by Anonymous
cool can you stop by thanks.that was a very cool story was that T or was it F?
meek
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• Oct. 30, 2006
I'm enjoying the story...
Posted by opckid
*grins*
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