• Nov. 21, 2006
~Chapter Five~ FINALLY!!!!
Chapter Five
"We will be landing Fort Peters, Alabama, in the next 15 minutes."
The pilot's voice coming through the intercom pulled Ian from his sleep. "Finally", he thought, "we'll be there." With that thought, the worry he hadn't anticipated flooded his mind, filled his heart. Trying to keep the fear at bay, he mentally went over his plan. "I'll get my bags, then get a cab. Then I'll head to Dawson." Not much of a plan, but it was something. His breath was coming fast, he'd be home soon. Home. A smile stretched across his face.
Raina was expieriencing none of Ian's joy. Instead, all she felt was dread. Her Aunt Cora was known as the socialite of Fort Peters. And, of course, Cora expected Raina to act with the same "grace and good upbringing". Translated by Raina, that was snobbiness and spoiled, self-centeredness. She was not glad about this visit, to say the least.
Jeremy. He had no clue why he had boarded this plane, and didn't know what he'd do in Fort Peters. He knew Ian was going there for a reason, and he'd learned from talking to the girl behind him that she was going to see her aunt. Yesterday, in Jeremy's stressed, angered mind, getting on a plane and leaving without notice had been a brilliant plan. Now.....well, it wasn't such a hot idea.
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• Nov. 21, 2006
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Posted by DeKampf
hmm...what is his plan...
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• Nov. 24, 2006
new to blogging
Posted by tazzypirate92
Cool story! I like it alot. This is probably weird for you; getting a comment on your story from a colmplete stranger. Weird, ya? Tell the truth now! Well, i like yur story nad write a few stories of my own, though they are fantasy, lord of the rings type stories.
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• Nov. 24, 2006
want more story
Posted by tazzypirate92
Hey i like your story. I got a bit confused @ first but now i get it. I'll be checking in more often. I like you blog and your avatar! THey are cool!
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• Nov. 25, 2006
Hey
Posted by JesusLovesU
I just thought I would come by this blog of yours too. It si a pretty interesting story. I love to read so I will prob be coming by to see if you have updated every now and then.
Britta
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• Dec. 1, 2006
Yay!
Posted by opckid
More story!
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