Aug. 5, 2007 - the first chapter
this is the first chapter of the story I'm writing
It was a windy saturday after noon Elizabeth came out the back door now it was a warm day but the wind made Elizabeth chilly so she went inside. Her mom was in tha office typing hey mom Elizabeth said may I bake some cookies? sure honey as long as you put on your apron said mrs. Harper okay mom. While Elizabeth was geting out the ingredients the phone rang it was Elizabeths best friend Emily. Hello said Elizabeth hey Liz what are you doing? baking said Elizabeth baking what? cookies oh what are you going to do when you're done? I don't know hey do you want to come over? asked Elizabeth (Elizabeth had made the cookies while she talked) sure the next thing she heard was the knock on the front door(Elizabeth and Emily where next door neighbors) Elizabeths mom answered the door hello mrs.Harper hello Emily Elizabeths in the kitchen when Emily got to the kitchen she asked are you going to make a another batch?(Elizabeth usually made two batchs) yes anwered Elizabeth do you want to help? sure answered Emily but I have to be home in an hour to make dinner okay said Elizabeth. When the cookies were done the girls went outside two eat them I love baking don't you asked Emily yes and it would be even more to have a bakery. Ya but I don't think kids are aloud to have their own business said Emily I guess not said Elizabeth she looked thoughtful for a moment then said I know my dad knows alot about owning a business I could ask him if kids can have their own business thats a great idea agreed Emily.
Comments
Aug. 6, 2007 - Untitled Comment
Posted by hebullard
I like the story. Thanks for making me a friend.
