My journey through Narnia

Sep. 11, 2007 - More of the story

As some of you know I've been writing story.  I've already posted the first chapter.  If you haven't read the first chapter or you want to read it again click here.  Here is what I have from the second chapter right now.

That night after dinner when her dad was reading his flight magazine Elizabeth asked, dad can a kid have their own business? Mr.Green put down his flight magazine then said they can if if a parent signs all the contracts and order forms.   Why do you want to know? Oh, Emily and I where just talking about kids having their own business.  There was silence for a moment then Elizabeth said dad if Emily and I started our own business would you sign all the contracts and order forms?  Sure,Betsy.  The next day when Elizabeth told Emily what her dad had said Emily said thats great then she brought out a big piece of poster board with lots of writing on it whats this? asked Elizabeth.  It's our business plan answered Emily.  business plan? yes now first we have to figure out how much money we have.  I have twelve dollars said Elizabeth thats good and with my money we have twenty-seven dollars(in case you're wondering Emily had fifteen dollars.)

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Sep. 12, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by hebullard

How interesting.

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Sep. 28, 2007 - hi

Posted by Colabear

I was hoping you can come check out my blog.
http://colabear789.livejournal.com/
I like your picture from the Chronicles of Narnia

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Oct. 3, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BookLover

Thanks for the comment! Your are doing good on your story.
Amy

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