Sunhi-The Revenge by supermatthew

Chapter 1

Once upon a time on the planet Manu all was quiet. Suddenly a meteor shower hit the planet, but good. That is when Sunhi's parents put him in an access pod. He was heading for Pluto. Just then a meteor hit him to Earth.

Chapter 2

Time has passed and now Sunhi is 20. He has landed on Earth. He was surrounded by Gonges, a type of snake. He was helpless. Just then a pegasus came by and then they went to the deserts.

My comments on these chapters are : Earth is not the Earth we know today. It is an Earth filled with magical creatures. I like to use alot of settings in my chapters. I like drama and lots of action. I like to use cliffhangers at the end of each chapter to make you want to come back and read more. I hope you enjoy it and I have already written up to chapter 7,  but you are going to have to wait.