a poet's mind, a maiden's heart

Apr. 6, 2009

Before Christ

I wrote this poem about a year ago as I reflected on my spiritual journey. It might sound depressing at first, but I find such joy in knowing these things in the verses are no longer true of me because of Christ's surpassing love and grace. My relationship with Him has completely altered my life. Thank God!

I’m sure some of you can relate to this; I’m sure countless people have felt this way. So, this poem is dedicated to you all.

 

 

A torn petal,

A fallen leaf,

A bruised apple;

I was such as these.

 

A withered field,

A colorless sky,

A shattered cup;

I fell into the same class.

 

A wordless song,

A burned-out light,

A pointless story;

I was akin to them all.

 

A hardened heart,

A passionless soul,

A hopeless life;

I was their dwelling place.

 

Why should I be offered a fresh start?

How could my tattered being

                            be pieced back together?

I’ll never completely understand.

 

All I know is that He made it happen.

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Apr. 6, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anna93
Wow, that was such a lovely poem! You are so gifted at writing! :)
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Apr. 6, 2009 - Hi!

Posted by JessLBee
That is a great poem! So beautiful!

~Jess
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Apr. 7, 2009 - Thanks!

Posted by Emily94
Thank you so much for your comment! They all make feel so welcome. I would love to be friends! Your blog is really neat. Great poem by the way, very true. I'll be back!

Emily
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Apr. 8, 2009 - WOW!

Posted by MaidenPrincess
Warrior Maiden,

That is such a beautiful poem and so true. Thanks for sharing.

With Love In The Savior,
Maiden Princess
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Apr. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by musiclover, but i'm not logged in
i love your poem....it's so true! can i copy and paste your entry about "prince charming" to an email and send it to a couple of friends? what you said is so true, and i want to get word out to people about this. please comment me (homeschoolblogger.com/musiclover) and let me know.
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