When the bee stung Sara hse jumped up and down, it hurt.

Character: Sara  Emotion: angry

When Sara opened her door to her bedroom she put her hands on her hips. Rebecca! shouted Sara. Rebecca  looked as if she would cry. What she said. Why did you mess my bedroom up? She shouted again. Imm Imm Sorry, said Rebecca crying.

Character: Sara  Emotion :Happy

When Sara woke up that morning she was so happy it was her birthday. She jumped up and down. She ran down stairs to wake up the others, But the others where not there. Sara was disapointed because without the others she could not have her birthday. Sara went slowly into the kitchen to get breakfast and all of a sudden the light went on and Sara's family showted serprise, serprise. Sara was shoked for one sekant. Oh thatnk you, thank you showted Sara. She was happy becus of her family.

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Posted by skmarlow

Miranda, you are doing very good work here! You are showing the characters' feelings in a way that I can really see them. Did you accidentally forget to do one for the bee example? if so, that's all right. I can tell by reading the other two examples that you know what you're doing. Like I told Nathan, keep practicing this skill. The more you practice, the easier it gets.

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