1. character, setting, probem, events, the solution

2.The Mayflower Secret

Elizabeth Tilley, On the Mayflower, that she knows a secret of how someone died and when she's asked if she knows how he died she lies and said "I don't know", Her parents die, at the end the truth omes out about how the man died.

3.

As I gazed into the mirror I rubbed my tired hazel eyes. I started to brush my already shiney teeth. After all of that I combed my short curly red hair. Then I remembered that I said I'd play with my friend and I'd stay loyal to that . I ran down the stairs , all of a sudden my mom stopped me and asked if I made my bed this morning. I gulped. I knew I didn't but I didn't want to get in trouble so I said, "umm yes mom, I did" and at that I kept running till I saw my friend. Phew! What a run, I told him I ran all the way from my house to here.  We played around for awhile till I had to go back home to have dinner.

When I was all most there I saw the school bully. I never forgave him when on the first day of school started he pushed me into a mud puddle. I dodged around behind a house and ran down the alley and contined to run all the way back home to finely have dinner.  The end.

4. a. shocked b, bored c. frightened

5. You see in this picture there is a chubby little penguin wearing his little black and white tuxedo. He is standing on a large black rock that is sitting in the clear  icy blue ocean.

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Posted by skmarlow

You did a nice, thorough job on the test, Nathan. I can see that you pretty much have a handle on the 5 elements and can "whip them out" for a book that you are reading. :-)

For #2, you didn't have to go to all the trouble of creating a scene for those physical/personality traits. You just needed to create a character and write a short sketch, like... "Billy Bob has hazel eyes and bright red, curly hair. Sometimes he loses his temper...." and so on. But I was able to see your character in the scene that you wrote.

Nice job on the penguin, with some great descriptive words like "icy blue water." Brrrrrr.....

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