Character: Penny-a horse

Setting:

Penny was running through a field of flowers. It was a prarie full of flowers. Yellow flowers, red flowers, blue flowers, orange flowers, and white flowers. Then a four foot tall yellow lion came from a forest near by. Penny's heart was pounding. The ground rumbled as Penny galluped away.

Character: Sara

Setting: Ocean Beach

That sunny afternoon Sara was happy walking down a golden beach. She had a smile on her face. She got sand into her pink and red flowered bathing suit and then went into the blue sparking water to wash.  

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Posted by skmarlow

You took some nice pictures with your "writing camera," Miranda. I can see the field with all those beautiful flowers, and the horse galloping away in fright! I would cut out the extra "blue flowers" you have, though. I think you wrote it twice. :-)

Sparkling water is a great descriptive word for the beach scene. Nice!

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