Sugarloaf Mountain Academy
Mar. 14, 2008
Lesson 12 Dialog

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Mar. 15, 2008 - Lesson 12

Posted by skmarlow


I could read this too, Nathan.
Oh, I liked how you made "He scowled back" a separate paragraph. That is perfectly acceptable and really adds emphasis to the scene. :-)

You forgot to indent when Katie starts talking--- "Who's asking you to?"
But I think it was a slip and not a "not knowing" problem.
Nice job!


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Jan. 9, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by SuzyScribbles


OK, so are you going to report in over here on your Bible progress? Hope so! Everyone else will visit too. Make friends! share!


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