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Technique to use

2,1,5,3,9,6,7,4,8

An usual setting

One bright sunny afternoon Sarah and Jen were walking on a glittering beach. The water was sparkling. Suddenly Sarah spotted a lifeboat on shore. It had peices off of the sides. Sarah and Jen did not know what or where it came from.

A sound effect

Sarah and Jen went down to a beach to play. It was about the afternoon when they got there. First Sarah and Jen made a sand castle then they walked to the glittering water. Suddenly Sarah heard a squeak. Sarah jumped back. "What was that?" Jen Heard Sarah. She ran to Sarah as fast as she could. When Jen got to Sarah she said to Sarah. "what was that?" Sarah replied "it is a boat that washed up from the sea."

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Dingling, dingling. Sarah's fake gold clock went off. Sarah got out of bed and turned the clock off. She got into her blue calico dress. It was her favorite dress because it matched the blue in her eyes. She looked in the mirror as she brushed her long brown hair. She heard her mom calling her to breakfast. Sarah walked down the stairs. She was excited when she saw her breakfast. Bacon and ham, her favorite. Her mouth started to water. Then her brother James walked in the front door. It startled Sarah and she turned her head to look what was so loud. Sarah, come on your late for school. Oh no Sarah said, I forgot about school. Sarah jumped up, she grabbed her books and ran to the buggy. James got into the buggy too. When Sarah got to school the bell rang and she ran into the school.

Title: Katie and the Mustang, book 1

Mr. Stevens wants the mustang shot  so Katie saves the mustang at midnight and Hiram helps.

Title: Kingdoms Dawn

Leinad learns to sword fight and brings the the Kings message to the people.

Title: Sarah and James

Sarah wants a horse so Sarah and James set out to catch a wild horse.

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Character: Penny-a horse

Setting:

Penny was running through a field of flowers. It was a prarie full of flowers. Yellow flowers, red flowers, blue flowers, orange flowers, and white flowers. Then a four foot tall yellow lion came from a forest near by. Penny's heart was pounding. The ground rumbled as Penny galluped away.

Character: Sara

Setting: Ocean Beach

That sunny afternoon Sara was happy walking down a golden beach. She had a smile on her face. She got sand into her pink and red flowered bathing suit and then went into the blue sparking water to wash.  

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1. Character, setting, problem, plot, soulution

2. The Hat.

Lisa, Hedghog

Winter in a farmyard and woods

Problem for Hedgehog, can't get a stocking off his head and he is embarassed

Problem for Lisa, to get her stocking back

The hedgehog talks to farm animals, they laugh at him but he tells them the good things about having the stocking on his head.  Lisa chases the hedgehog. She gets the stocking off the hedgehopgs head but then all the other animals went and put on Lisa's clothes from the clotheline so now she has bigger troubles.  The hedgehop is happy he got rid of his hat and thinks its funny that all the other animals have "hats" on and says "animals should never wear clothes".

3. My character is a 9 year old girl. Her name is Joy. She smiles a lot so you can see her sparking teeth but sometimes it makes people think she is up to something. Her red hair is short and curly so her mom puts barrettes in her hair to hold it out of her face. Joy hates her hair back because it makes her hair stick out and kids make fun of her. She likes to draw and paint. She hates bullies because they pick on her best friend McKenna who is only seven. She tries to protect McKenna and she tattles to the teaher and sometimes tells lies about the bullies to get them in trouble.  Joy tries very hard in school but she doesn't think she is very smart. She gets into trouble a lot because she talks so much. She is a kind girl that tries hard to think of others and she loves her family very much.

4. a. shocked b. bored c. frightened

5.

There once was a girl named Alice. She had brown hair. One day she woke up droopy eyed and yawning. She stretched out her arms and rubbed her eyes to get the sleepies out. She went downstairs to get breakfast because her stomach was rumbling. She found that no one was there. She went to the living room and turned on the light. Her family was all there. They all jumped out and said surprise! Happy birthday!  She opened her presents. She got a new tan coat and bonnet. She had a big smile on her face and she gae her mom a bear hug and said thank you. Her mom told her she had another surprise for her, she was going to take her to town to her favorite ice cream shop.

Later in town Alice had on her new coat and bonnet and they went to the ice cream shop. Her mother bought her a large crunchy pink ice cream bar. Alice thanked her mom. Then they went outside and ate their ice cream as they walked down the sidewalk.

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It rained all week during our camping trip. There was thunder and lightning. It was very cold too. We huddled in the tent all week. The rain made a big puddle around our tent.

Katie was at the aquarium. She saw a scary shark swim by her. She jumped back from the tank.

I got assigned to find the ancient chest. I could  just imagine seeing the gold shiny coins and blue dazzling jeweled necklaces. The next day I went on my quest. It was exciting going on the quest but dangerous and scary too. When I went outside I jumped up and down again and again because I was anxious to get going. I saw the opening of the big cave in front of me.It looked cold and wet, but I clapped my hands because I was finally there. I went inside and saw something behind the rocks. It was the treasure chest. I found the lost treasure chest of the Ancients! It was an old, ,brown ,rusty chest but when I opened it I found all the jewels and gold I had imagined.

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Dead words :like, fun,lots,then,got, get

My bedroom

I walk into my bright blue and green room. I admire my neatly made bed with the blue comforter. I share my room with my sister Bethany. Her bed has a blue and green comforter with three small square pillows and a huge hairy stuffed dog she just got from James after she was in the hospital. AS I sit in the padded green chair next to our green desk I look over and see the bright blue dresser the holds my neatly folded clothes. Ha ha. Above the dresser is a large round mirror that has a sparly green scarf draped over it. Our names are on the wall in block letters painted in blue and green. The are also many posters and pictures on the walls. There is a light tan carpet that I just vacumed that covers the floor. I like my room now but soon when Bethany moves out I will change many things and it will be my own room.

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When the bee stung Sara hse jumped up and down, it hurt.

Character: Sara  Emotion: angry

When Sara opened her door to her bedroom she put her hands on her hips. Rebecca! shouted Sara. Rebecca  looked as if she would cry. What she said. Why did you mess my bedroom up? She shouted again. Imm Imm Sorry, said Rebecca crying.

Character: Sara  Emotion :Happy

When Sara woke up that morning she was so happy it was her birthday. She jumped up and down. She ran down stairs to wake up the others, But the others where not there. Sara was disapointed because without the others she could not have her birthday. Sara went slowly into the kitchen to get breakfast and all of a sudden the light went on and Sara's family showted serprise, serprise. Sara was shoked for one sekant. Oh thatnk you, thank you showted Sara. She was happy becus of her family.

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Writing Workshop assignment 1

Book: New Friends

My favorite character is Rachel

The setting is in her Amish home and school

One thing that happened in the story is that Rachel was trying to break her habit of not doing the chores and throwing things around.

Assignment 2

Characters

I like the character of Black Beauty because I really like horses. He is a strong horse and tries to be happy where ever he is. He is a good friend to Ginger.

I did not like Nicholas Skinner who was on of Black Beauty's owners. He was very mean. He made Black Beauty work hard and did not treat him nice or give him enough food.

I like d'Artagnan in The Three Musketeers. He helped to save the King. He was a good friend to the Musketeers. He was a good sword fighter. He was a good guy that wanted to fight bad guys. He was cute.

I did not like Cardinal Richelieu in The Three Musketeers because he wanted to take the throne and he would have other bad guys kill people. He was evil and he was ugly.

Annie in My Pony Jack. I like Annie because she loves horses. She is a good rider and she like to be in horse shows. She takes good care of her horse Jack.

I did not like Yzma in Emperor's New Groove. She was a bad girl who wanted to take over the kingdom and kill Emperor Kuzco. She looks freaky and scary. She orders Kronk to do bad things for her.

 Lesson 3 & 4

Penney is a wilde horse. She is nice to toher horses. She likes to grase. She dosent like to grase a lot. She is shy to humans. She Bucks people off of her back. She is brown with a blak mane and tale.

Sara is shy. She has blond haer and blue eyes. She is 8 years old. She likes to ride horses that her frends own. She loves her brothers and loves her sister. She gos to school. She dislikes being litlist.

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