Hi! This is a poem I just wrote. What do you guys think of it? I think I'm going to put it in FAD er, well you know what I mean. It's going to be sung by a gypsy girl named Rhona. What do you think?
Her ebony tresses fell silvery in the moonlight,
She danced by the light of the moon.
The silver sphere shown down from heaven,
Its gaze fell softly upon the wood nymph,
Dancing, dancing,
Dancing in the moonlit night.
Her voice lifted its song silver-tuned in the moonlight.
She sang by the light of the moon.
The feathery mists smiled, framing the moon.
The forest nymph was Swayentlay – the moon’s daughter,
The fates are from Greek mythology, they were three women who wove the mortals lives, and cut the thread of life when it was time. They also shared an eyeball. We're like the fates in a way, since we share the same Muse. And this is where we talk about our novels in progress
Sep. 18, 2008 - Ahh!!
Well done!