Oct. 9, 2008
Writing class; Lesson 5
Hello Readers,I decided to do many today since I find this fun.
Character: Jalina
Emotion: Angry
Jalina crossed her arms and narrowed her eyes when she saw that someone played with her things."Who did this?" she shouted. Jalina stamped across the room and scowled as she scanned the damage.
Character:Lilane
Emotion:Pain and Embarassment
Lil shrieked as the bee stung her.She hopped around in circles clutching her hand when the hurt bumped a tree.Then she heard someone laughing in a bush.She blushed and rolled her eyes when she saw it was her cousin.
Emotion: Sneaky
Lil tiptoed carefully across the beautiful hall,for no one is allowed to go out of bed past 10 o'clock. Her eyes flitted to and fro in the dark.The crouched figure melted into the shadows. "Aha!" Lil thought as the the dark shape went inside her cousin's bedroom," He was having a midnight snack. next time I'll catch him with my camera.
Character: Jalina
Emotion: Angry
Jalina crossed her arms and narrowed her eyes when she saw that someone played with her things."Who did this?" she shouted. Jalina stamped across the room and scowled as she scanned the damage.
Character:Lilane
Emotion:Pain and Embarassment
Lil shrieked as the bee stung her.She hopped around in circles clutching her hand when the hurt bumped a tree.Then she heard someone laughing in a bush.She blushed and rolled her eyes when she saw it was her cousin.
Emotion: Sneaky
Lil tiptoed carefully across the beautiful hall,for no one is allowed to go out of bed past 10 o'clock. Her eyes flitted to and fro in the dark.The crouched figure melted into the shadows. "Aha!" Lil thought as the the dark shape went inside her cousin's bedroom," He was having a midnight snack. next time I'll catch him with my camera.
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Oct. 10, 2008 - Lesson 5
Posted by skmarlow Oh, I like these! You had good word choices to SHOW what the characters were feeling. (I like the little icons, too). LOL
I liked the "new" feeling you thought up: Sneaky. This was a great sentence showing sneaky:
"Her eyes flitted to and fro in the dark..." That shows she
sneaking, all right.
Nice job and I'm glad you're having fun...
I liked the "new" feeling you thought up: Sneaky. This was a great sentence showing sneaky:
"Her eyes flitted to and fro in the dark..." That shows she
sneaking, all right.
Nice job and I'm glad you're having fun...