Halfway through......
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Bad Impressions

2,1,5,3,9,6,7,4,8

Dialogue or Action (I don't know which) :

"Race you there!'' Jen laughed joyfully as she and Katie sped down the rocky path the beach. Katie easily got ahead with her long-legged self. ''Katie, wait up!'' Jen gasped as searing pain tore down her side. She suddenly skidded to a stop. "What's that?" Katie breathed. "Looks like a lifeboat to me,'' Jen panted heavily with the morning sun beating down on her back.

Question:

Jen hurriedly helped the boy and his younger sister from the life boat. "What happened?'' questioned Katie as soon as they took their first bite of  the picnic lunch she brought. The boy looked around the beach before he started .........

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