Homeschool Monkey

Jul. 18, 2006

The Evil Monster and the Evil Bear

Once upon a time, a hundreds of millions of bees.  They were working (all of them) on a bee hive.  By the time they were done, it was GI-NORMOUS so all of them could live in it. 

 

Then, the guarder bees, one of them found a bear and it stung the bear and then the bee was dead.  The bear wasn't even hurt! 

 

Coming from the East is a bear.  Not just any bear, the evil bear! 

 

Then, the other bee guarder said to a monster, "Who goes there?"  And the monster BIT him!  "OW!" says the bee. 

 

So then, the other bee stings him.  And he wasn't hurt either. 

 

Then, the third guarder bee saw what happened.  He was going back to the nest to tell what happened.  In the nest, he shouted, "Two Giant Intruders!"  as loud as he could. 

 

 So then, all the bees didn't believe him because he said, "There's a bear and a monster." 

 

Then, the Queen Bee said, "Who would believe that?" 

 

No one answered. 

 

So they just went back to work. 

 

The Bear got closer. 

 

The Monster got closer.

 

The Bear and the Monster say, "Only one mile left."

 

So then, they all see the bear and the monster.  And then they rub their eyes!  And after they rub their eyes, the bear and the monster hid. 

 

So then, they are like, "That was strange!" 

 

So then, they keep on workin'. 

 

So then, they see a bear and a monster AGAIN!  And they were like, "Wow!  That is weird.  I've been seeing a bear and a monster two times today!"

 

So they go back to work. 

 

Ten minutes later...

 

The bee hive's rumbling.  The BEAR is there! 

 

So then the bees ALL go out to sting the bear.  But then, they get an idea.  They don't HAVE to sting them.  Their sharp legs cut the bear.  He was severely hurt when he went back. 

 

Then, the monster comes. 

 

Then, the loudest thing they ever heard was shaking on their bee nest.  It was a yellow, polka-dotted monster! 

 

"Strange!" says the bees! 

 

So then, they all go out to hurt the monster.  They do the SAME thing the did to the bear, but they see that their legs are cut off!  They are like, "What?"  So, they have to sting him. 

 

Thousands of bees die, but at least they killed the monster. 

 

The Bear comes back!  So then, the other bees still have their legs.  So, they do the same thing they did to the bear last time.  So then, a couple bees sting him so he would die. 

 

The End.

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Jul. 19, 2006 - wow!!

Posted by velvet97
i realy liked the story and i hoppe yopu wiplplp be my fripnd and let me do a sory gest like that!!
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Jul. 19, 2006 - That is cute

Posted by purpleprincess
That is a cute story lil bro.
I love how you have such a creative mind!
Love Ya,
Princess
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Aug. 8, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by historygeek
that was a pretty cool story i'm going to add you to my friends list
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Aug. 14, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Storyman
Wow! That was something! Goooooooooooood story!
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