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Monday 15 December 2008
Amutas Chapter 2

Posted in Posted by Lois Walfrid Johnson

Hey guys!!!! Sorry I didn't post this on the weekend like I had wanted! I am one of those people that has to have inspiration to work and sadly I had none!!!! Anyhow, here it is! All Nature Sings will be coming soon! (maybe!) Sorry this is so short!!!!!

                     CHAPTER 2
By Sydnee K. Yavanenski/ Lois Walfrid Johnson

I never forgot what that man said. I had never heard of a god who was sacrificed for the whole world and neither had any of our priests. They all said the same thing. "What god would sacrifice himself for someone he didn't even know?"
It all was very puzzling to me.
I finally dismissed those words as the crazed utterings of a man near death and went on enjoying life.
I went to war, fighting to conquer more lands for the emperor. I took many captives and was honored as a great warier. I moved to the Aztec capitol to be an adviser to the emperor. I got married and had a child, a little girl, but in her 6th year she was sacrificed for her blood, which was believed to bring  good crops. All it brought me was heartache. Shortly after our daughter's death, my wife went crazy. One day she wondered off and was never seen again. I thought my life was over then. I had nothing to live for. The gods had failed me, The priests had failed me. What was left? Tears are splashing on the parchment even as I write this.
I had almost decided to end me misery when a messenger came to the court of Montezuma (the emperor at that time and my lifelong friend). He brought news of men in our kingdom. Strange men with fair hair and long beards,
Montezuma was fascinated and decided to leave at once to go see them. He told me I would be going with him. I told him I was too old for I had seen near 60 winters. He insisted and we left the next day.

Comments

Monday 15 December 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Spitfires

The plot thickens! I like it- it's a very original plot, with an interesting topic.

The only thing I could think of editing-wise is the spelling of warriors, which is really nit-picking! So yet again, well-written and keep it up!

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Tuesday 16 December 2008 - Amatuas (did i spell it wrong?)

Posted by always narnian

WOW SYD! Keep it up! Its going good! Really want to join the Inklings!

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Tuesday 23 December 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Pip

LOVERLY!!! Oi luve dose two parts you mumbled to me over da phone. HURRY UP AN POST MORE!
God bless,
The Impatient Pip

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