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Sunday 19 April 2009
Mummified, Part Two

Posted in Posted by Mary Norton

*crash sounds on the roof of the Inkling's attic*

Sweinson, ye clumsy bird!!! You just DROPPED me!!! And to think, you're supposed to be a graceful bird!!!!!!!

*climbs through the window and smiles sheepishly at everyone*

Sorry 'bout thet, Sweinson is one of the Falx, a breed of giant GRACEFUL falcons in Enaelo, they are the Creature of Dar-Bazel. But he is extremely clumsy and doesn't quite know how to fly quite well. ^^'

And I am so sorry that I haven't been posting, some of my characters were holding my "Mummified" notebook up for ransom and I didn't want to start posting another story and leaving y'all in the dark as to what happens next!

So here goes!!!!

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     Rachael wiped off the blood-covered blade and stuck it back into the depths of her pocket. She had to admit, she’d been good with a knife ever since she’d found this strange weapon with an elaborately carved handle in one of the abandoned houses that she and Alex had looted. Turning it over in her hands sometimes and studying it hard, she wondered if maybe the graceful runes on it actually meant something. Probably not. But still, she liked to pretend.

     “You look awful lonely, love.”

     The voice belonged to a woman with a soft English accent, and the words rolled off her tongue like so much honey. Rachael was almost afraid to get a look at her addressor, but she shook her head to clear it and turned to see the most beautiful person she had ever seen. She was wearing the deepest shade of violet imaginable, with a black cloak that gave her an all-around gothic air of mystery. Long, mahogany-colored hair and piercing sable eyes finished off her countenance.

     “Who are you?” Rachael demanded. “And what do you want?”

     A clear, rippling laugh echoed through the alley.

     “My name is Asmarelda, love,” she returned silkily. “What do I want?” She walked circles around the confused girl, who stepped backwards and held her dagger out defensively. The woman chuckled and pushed the weapon away. “I know you as well as if you were my own sister, Rachael, and I have already witnessed your authority.”

     “A-authority?” the girl faltered, not knowing what to do. No one on this face of this planet knew what Rachael’s name was, or even cared. Why this strange woman, and why now? A chill crept down Rachael’s spine.

     Asmarelda smiled cunningly. “Yes, authority, love. Word on the street is that you remain unmatched due to that dagger and the incredible talent you possess. That no one has ever been able to hurt you without bearing a scar all their days, to remind them that you, naught but a sixteen-year-old girl, were able to defeat them. You see, love, I like that . . . People that stand out over the others with their brilliant abilities.”

     “What are you talking about?” Rachael snapped. The tone in Asmarelda’s voice was getting on her nerves and setting her on edge. It was scaring her, and yet it was soothing her…saying things that she needed, wanted to hear. It was entrancing.


Comments

Sunday 19 April 2009 - cool

Posted by Barrie

Cool, but creepy. How creepy is this story gonna get?

~Barrie

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Sunday 19 April 2009 - Raynea: YES!!!! She thinks it's creepy! Me: NO!!!! She thinks it's creepy!!!!

Posted by Srrindi Azure

OK.....hopefully not very. ^^ Pretty much the only creepy element of this story is Asmarelda; 'specially since the mutant small-pox gets a cure in the end, thanks to an angel!!!! Sorry, it's just a story that I'm writing because my sister dreamed it and she wanted me to write a story about it!!!! (am I too creative??)

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Sunday 19 April 2009 - Okay

Posted by Barrie

Okay. That's cool, though, why you're writing it. I just don't want it to get too creepy, ye know, cause I had a story that started out rather innocent Peter Pan fantasy, and then it turned dark and bad and everything that I'm fighting in my writings now that I've learned that it had crept into my work! Be careful. I'm not trying to seem annoying, but ye just seem like ye could be succeptible to it. That is not an insult, I assure ye, it's just something to be careful for.

Semper fidelis,
Barrie

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Tuesday 21 April 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Pip

*shivers* Wow. This is written really, really well. That lady freaks me out! You're doing a very good job, but indeed, be sure by the end of the book that you have balanced out the shadows with light.
~PIP~/Kip

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