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Monday 21 September 2009
My first ever attempt at a poem.

Posted in Posted by Jules Verne

So you can’t cheat fate, and there he stands on the stage.
A sweeping bow, but no applause, for it takes a master thief
To steal the breath of breathless crowds
This puppet with a paper crown, this plaything
dangling
by a string
This mannequin sitting on the throne,
Is a fool to think he’s a king.
While ravens and crows fill the skies,
While imagined friends plot his demise,
Delilah cuts his hair, plucks out his eyes.
Then, stabbed in the back by a Judas,
A Brutus,
An arrow shot at random,
Paris’ deadly missile,
Buried itself in his back,
His heel.


The ground is red with his blood,
His life,
Look, the dogs lick it up,
and die,
Then fall Caesar,
Exeunt actor,
Defeated.

Well, whatcha think?  I know, it had no meter, but that was on purpose.  It was inspired by Viva la Vida, a song from Coldplay (the most awesome band ever!).  Anyways...

- Jules Verne

Comments

Tuesday 22 September 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous

Oh! Jules, that was really really neat. Me like it. :-)

The former member,
~Laura C. Wylde

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Tuesday 22 September 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by narnialover95

Wow, that was pretty neat! I liked it, good job!
Blessings,
Taylor

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