Writer's Nook - Lesson 12 --
Mar. 18, 2008
Lesson 12 --
INDENT “Batter-up! We haven’t got all day!” Tom shouted.
INDENT “Stop yelling,” Katie said. She grabbed the bat and scowled at her brother. He scowled back.
INDENT “No girls,” Sean piped up from the pitcher’s mound.
INDENT “What do you care? She’s not on your team,” Tom snapped.
INDENT Sean glared at Katie for a moment, then shrugged. “Suit yourself. But I’m not going easy on her just ’cause she’s a girl.”
INDENT “Who’s asking you to?” Katie said. “Play ball!”
Leave a Clue
Mar. 19, 2008 - Lesson 12
 Posted by skmarlow
What do you mean you got one wrong? This all looks right to me! And if you DID get one wrong and went back and corrected it, then kudos to you. Thanks for being honest. It's fine to get some wrong--hopefully correcting your mistakes helps you learn how to avoid other mistakes in the future.
I'm wondering why you had to write "indent" in your post. I've found that indenting works OK in posts, just not in replies. :-)
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Kit Schwester is twenty-two years old and lives in America. She grew up in Germany with a brother, a sister, and her parents. After graduating early from school, Kit went to a college in Germany where they recommended that she go to a bigger college in America. She went, despite the disapproval of her parents. She now works as a police/detective.
