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Aug. 26, 2008
Writing Workshop: Lesson 5
Character: Cael
Emotion: Indecision
The hot air, laden with smoke, closed in about him. Cael rubbed his sweaty hands on his jerkin, fingers clenching nervously at the leather. He dared not speak, for there was no choice but in legality. In his mind he hated the man who could so easily evoke the answer he desired. His heart thudded a rapid rhythm, fueling the anger in his chest, as he fought to give his reply...
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Aug. 27, 2008 - Lesson 5
I also liked the added part about the heavily laden air--this really put pics in my head.
Oh, you did sign the Mr. Linky for Lessons 1 and 2, and I see you left comments, too! I wonder what happened with that??? I sure don't remember getting an e-mail prompt from you for those lessons, but....ooops! I see the date is last Friday. I was on the computer that day, too. Hmmm...well, I'm all "caught up" now. :-)
I like that your blog is easy to read and the lessons are all stacked up nicely in the posts section. That's actually how I knew you'd done lessons 1 and 2 so I could go back and look at them. :-)
I'm off to bed....